He Is...

August 12, 2009
By Anonymous

His smile shines brighter than the mid-day sun
His eyes are like black holes,
Never-ending but beautiful.
His personality is unpredictable,
Changing day to day.
His arms are open all the time,
To hug and hold me tight.
He’s forever mine,
He’s my best friend,
He’s the one I need around
He’ll always be there for me,
And I’ll always be there for him,
We’’ cherish all of our moments together,
Until the very end.
He is…
What I never had.

The author's comments:
I guess you could take this poem in two ways.
1: My mom and dad divorced when I was little. He was never there and not what I concidered "father material."
2: I have never had a boy friend. (self explanitory)

I was really nervouse about posting this so please be truthful if you comment.

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on Sep. 24 2009 at 6:44 pm
Crazzzy_Megan GOLD, Ventura, California
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Really good! AMAZING!keep writing!(:

on Sep. 24 2009 at 6:34 pm
flyingplanes GOLD, Lumberton, New Jersey
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It is very pure and sincere. Your words are believeable and the simplicity of your sentences allows the feeling to come through more powerfully, as a voice to your writing. Keep going.

Brndi said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 12:35 pm
i love this poem it is amazing keep writing


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