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Let Me Shoot You

Come here, let me shoot you. Let me shoot you with a potion.
A potion that will Wash away this Film. This Film blinding the Truth.
The Truth, my love, which only few can see.
War is raging around us. A Spiritual War, with Angels and Demons. A fight, slaying the Wrong for what is Right.

This reality you see was formulated by the Devil. He makes you think that TV,
Internet,
Sex,
Drugs,
Money,
Work,
Is Life.
This is the reality he has created. This is a false reality.

Come here, let me shoot you. Let me shoot you with a potion.
A potion that will Wash away this Film. This Film surrounding the Truth.
And once this film has fallen, YOU can see the Truth!
God’s Reality. The Reality that is so simple you pass it right up.
“Too Easy” you say. “Not for Me” you think. “Keep Walking” you go.
And you pass it right up. You shut the gate that was once open to you.
Foolish child of the World. Don’t you see what you’ve done?

The reality you miss, is the most beautiful thing EVER. It’s God’s original plan.
He’s given us the
Grass,
Trees,
Flowers,
Wind,
Rain,
Snow,
Heat,
Cold,
Sun,
Moon,
Stars,
You,
Me,
Us.

US IN CREATION. Was God’s original plan. Simple lives, lived in simple beauty. Worshiping Him for Eternity.
Growing flowers, lying in the grass, eating apples, studying Him, building sand castles, writing stories, visiting friends, singing songs, creating music, taking walks, dancing in the rain, spinning in the snow, basking in the sun, living in REALITY.
The Reality hidden by the Film over your Eyes.

So come here, let me shoot you.



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Green_Eyed_Irish said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 6:40 pm:
Hey guys, I am the author of this poem, and I just wanted to thank you all for your support! Your feedback means so much:) Thanks again <3
 
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Rebecca321 said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 5:26 pm:
:)
So true, all the simple things in life became beautiful to me when I looked at them the way God would.
 
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Derek C. said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 11:16 am:
i really liked this. its soo true and wonderful.
 
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TheProcrastinator said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 9:49 am:
Wonderful! Agrand poem. keep writing!
 
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ivyonthewall said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 7:15 am:
this rocks!! and it's so freakin true!
 
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keyboard_musican said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 2:47 pm:
WOW oh my gosh this seriously is amazing, u hav talent
 
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Greg J. said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 11:55 am:
wow. very powerful! I love this. I feel like the title was just a little misleading so it was certainly different, but its great!
 
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maddiegirl said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 11:37 pm:
wow i <3 the message in this....im a Christian 2 & i totally believe al of tht! great job!!! keep it up!
 
Green_Eyed_Irish replied...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 11:43 pm :
Wonderful! I'm sooo glad you like it.
 
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