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The Cage

I am not my own!
But parts of you - -
And you - - and you.
My sprit’s trapped in you.

I am not my own!
But parts of you - -
And you - - and you.
My sprit’s trapped in you.



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Green_Eyed_Irish said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 11:46 pm
Thanks so much for the comments, guys :) You're feedback is appreciated!
 
razorzRpainful said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 3:12 pm
spirtual ...serene
 
Aro_To_The_Heart This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 11:12 am
nice...really nice. i see what you mean. we all have ties to people no matter who they are or where they live....inspirational
 
Inkspired said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 8:34 pm
I didn't get it till I read your comment, but now I totally understand it! I think it's a really, really good idea, well written. May I suggest that instead of repeating the same stanza, you add something a bit more revealing about your purpose, then repeat the stanza? Otherwise, brilliant!
 
Green_Eyed_Irish replied...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 11:36 pm
Thank you :)
I only posted it twice so as to meet the minimum letter requirement :P
 
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