The Elements Speak

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The wind is whispering the words.

The sun is shining the warmth.

The rain is tinting my skin.

The clouds are shading the beams.

The world is turning underneath my soles.

. . .

The eyes are searching.

The mind is scouring.

The heart is beating.

The words are being discovered while the elements speak.





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Veritytrue said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 12:02 am
I think this is a wonderful poem. It's simple, but your word choice is what makes it sophisticated. I like your style (it reminds me of my own.) Great job and keep writing!
 
TheseEyesThatSeeTheWorld This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 9:44 pm
Thank you for again commenting on my work!
 
Megan Anne S. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:44 pm
Hi everyone. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem.
Please leave a comment telling me what you think. Critism is welcome; I only want to get better.
Thank you!
 
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