The Elements Speak

September 15, 2009
By MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
24 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway


The wind is whispering the words.

The sun is shining the warmth.

The rain is tinting my skin.

The clouds are shading the beams.

The world is turning underneath my soles.

. . .

The eyes are searching.

The mind is scouring.

The heart is beating.

The words are being discovered while the elements speak.



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on Sep. 26 2009 at 9:44 pm
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
24 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway

Thank you for again commenting on my work!

on Sep. 25 2009 at 12:02 am
Veritytrue SILVER, LaVista, Nebraska
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I think this is a wonderful poem. It's simple, but your word choice is what makes it sophisticated. I like your style (it reminds me of my own.) Great job and keep writing!

on Sep. 24 2009 at 3:44 pm
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
24 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway

Hi everyone. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem.

Please leave a comment telling me what you think. Critism is welcome; I only want to get better.

Thank you!




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