Your Eyes

September 5, 2009
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Eyes are piercing
aquard blue
looking far away

Eyes can look
but never see
where there view might lay

Eyes that can't
or maybe won't
see the hate and pain

Eyes that yearn
to see much more
than what they've so far gained





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bluemagnet22 said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 1:32 pm
Don't you just love it when poems just come to you n you don't even have to think about it lol it's even better when they turn out as good as this one lol great job:) u should check out some of my poems;)
 
hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 4:47 pm
that is the best! And thank you I will definatly check out some of yours!
 
Chelsea M. said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 6:02 pm
Love it!! That happens to me too! One time I was just eating a muffin and, boom, it hit me...Sometimes inspiration can hit you in the strangest places and at the strangest times!
 
hannahbee7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 6:28 pm
Yeah I love it when that happens!
 
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