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Love Rain

September 4, 2009
By YogaGirl SILVER, Williamstown, New York
YogaGirl SILVER, Williamstown, New York
9 articles 5 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can clearly see you're the daughter of a mother's aunt's grand-mother's uncle's father's grandaughter's daughter."~~~ "Wouldn't that make me a poptart?!"


As she sits upon the cloud,
She bows her head and weeps aloud.
Her tears fall down upon your head,
Upon the book that you have read.
The book you read provides a song,
A song about right and wrong.
And as you read you think of love,
It's in this Earth it's up above.
And up above an Angel cries,
She shares her love, the rain must


rise.


The author's comments:
I really like angels, and I think they are inspirational. I would be pleased to get comments on this peice of work.

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on Oct. 5 2009 at 6:18 pm
YogaGirl SILVER, Williamstown, New York
9 articles 5 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can clearly see you're the daughter of a mother's aunt's grand-mother's uncle's father's grandaughter's daughter."~~~ "Wouldn't that make me a poptart?!"

Aww, thanks a lot.

on Oct. 1 2009 at 5:01 pm
MadAsAHatter GOLD, Ames, Iowa
15 articles 0 photos 20 comments
I really like this, its very sweet and innocent, its just rather nice and warm, and yea i agree, angels are inspirational and fit nicely into poems