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Daisies
September 3, 2009
She stares,
Unblinking,
Into the distance.
"Time of death?"
No response.
He turns,
Demanding an answer.
"12:05"
It's just so sad,
So tragic.
She was
So young.
So precious.
So alive
With pink cheeks,
Cute dimples
So sweet
So innocent.
But now she stares,
Unblinking,
Into the distance.
Her eyes are closed for her
And she looks so pretty.
She could almost be sleeping
With pink cheeks,
Cute dimples.
With daisies in her hair
And a knife at her side.
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This article has 14 comments.
Warm_My_Heart GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2011 at 3:54 am
So amazing. I love the end. Beautiful.
teenwrite123 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 3 2009 at 10:38 pm
selling --> spelling
teenwrite123 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 3 2009 at 10:37 pm
selling error: "pureley" --> "purely"
teenwrite123 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 3 2009 at 10:36 pm
pureley amazing
~uprising~ said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 5:51 pm
dude, this rocks!! I love it
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 4:45 pm
haha yeah, talking to me, you'll probably learn a lot of new words lol
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 4:20 pm
yeah it is, you rock, dude! fantasmic! <3
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 4:07 pm
awesome, thanks. lol i love having you to run ideas by!
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 3:58 pm
thanks! i debated for a really long time about whether it should be that or "and a gun in her hand." do you think i made the right call or is the gun thing more powerful?
