Last Few Days

September 3, 2009
By MessOfADreamer PLATINUM, North Tonawanda, New York
MessOfADreamer PLATINUM, North Tonawanda, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I write for the same reason I breathe -- because if I didn't, I would die." -Isaac Asimov


The eye contact we share
Used to excite my heart
But now, I just feel sad
My hopes are gone,
I've slowly given up
You are not a focus anymore
But I want you to be
I don't want it all to change
But I suppose my mind
Is protecting my heart
Because soon we'll part
And go our seperate ways
So I'm giving up
And wasting these last few days

The author's comments:
I found myself falling out of like with this guy, even though I wasn't ready to give up on him. The crush somehow just faded into nothingness.

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on Nov. 12 2009 at 4:38 pm
MessOfADreamer PLATINUM, North Tonawanda, New York
22 articles 2 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I write for the same reason I breathe -- because if I didn't, I would die." -Isaac Asimov

The funny thing is, I didn't write this about an ex, I wrote this about a crush that looked promising but nothing ever happened with. It's cool that people can relate it to different situations though. And thank you very much for the compliments. :D

on Oct. 24 2009 at 8:09 pm
Ms.Understood, Laramie, Wyoming
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what stephanie said. my ex just became my ex and i feel the same way. LOVE IT.

on Sep. 19 2009 at 8:21 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

i love it. thats how i feel with my ex. its amazing. keep on writing


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