Tear Drop

September 2, 2009
By RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
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It crawls down your red rosy cheeks,
leaving a wet slime mark,
As the wet glowing tear drop evaporates...
So does your secret...

Every tear drop comes down for a reason,
Whether it represents someone no longer with you,
Or represents the betrayal of a friend...
Tear drops come down for a reason

Tears feel your pain,
because if the tear wouldn't,
it would not evaporate...
which is exactly what you want to do...

Disappear

A tear drop,
Represents you...
When it's the most joyful moment,
or the most horrific...
A tear drop...is you.



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RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 1:18 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
thanks! :D

on Nov. 30 2009 at 8:21 pm
This was really deep and inspiring. I liked it a lot. Please rate and comment on some of my stuff as well. Particularly "Just a Guy". I have other stuff as well. I'm more than happy to rate and comment on yours as well. Just say the word. :)

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 6:03 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
thanks for the comment

BirdMan SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 11:36 am
BirdMan SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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i really like the end of this poem. I have to admit that the beginning is a little weak but hte ending is perfect!

It sort of reminded of that Emily Dickinson poem "Parting"

I dont know why it just did.

Nice job!

RLJoy said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:54 am
thanks for the comment!

on Oct. 3 2009 at 8:44 am
Hope_Princess BRONZE, Hebron, New Hampshire
4 articles 4 photos 377 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hope sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible."

WOW!!!!!! That was absolutely amazing! I can't believe you wrote that, it's like a professional's piece of work!

Superb!

Keep writing!




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