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I
Midmorning light scatters between the grass and dandelions,
Catching speckles of wild strawberries.
It must be spring.

II
His thumb presses in against the dent:
Cold and slightly sticky,
Yellow seeds scaling the surface of
Smooth, snakelike skin.
He drops it into the bowl

III
She does not like strawberries.
She turns over the alien thing in her hand,
Presses it to her nose:
That cool, sweet fragrance.
She does not like strawberries.
Her mouth is watering

IV
They sat green in the windowsill
And the children, every day, upon passing,
Would look and try to will them to ripeness

V
Her knife flicks through fruit over a table
Alone, her feet propped up on the extra chair
She takes a slice of strawberry as she works. Sweet
Tangy red and white flesh. Tart.
Her lips pucker,
Seeds crunching between her teeth

VI
From the damned tree they ate and God cursed them in their nakedness.
Their invisible children sat watching beneath the boughs, eating
Red strawberries

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Dec. 2, 2012 at 11:57 am:
You're right, the last stanza is the best. It completely changes the entire meaning of the poem- I had to go back and read it again. It meant something so much deeper and different the second time through. Normally stories, not poems, are the pieces with big plot twists; it was really cool how you managed to work one in. Great work. :)
 
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Kay4theRoses said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 12:48 pm:

The coolest thing(and most professional) about this poem is the way you change the way i understood the poem in the last stanza but kept it relevent.

read and comment my stuff, anybody? I'll return the favor.

 
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BluePen said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 11:21 pm:

I loved it ! It's awesome!

I love the imagery, the description! GAH! It was great, good job =)

 
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Kaleskat said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 8:56 am:
amazing poem, it's beautiful! Keep on writing. :)
 
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Mikey said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:17 pm:
This is a great piece; it really speaks to me. The last stanza is particularly powerful.
 
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