Is It To Late?

August 27, 2009
By RachyRach333 SILVER, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
RachyRach333 SILVER, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
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Why do I alwase run back to you when my hart is broken?
You never fix it.
I just dont understand.

You tell me that you like me
an Ive tolled you the same,
and still everything stays the same.

You tolled me onece that you loved me, but I dident let myself to belive.
I should of kept my mouth shut,
an not said a thing.

But know you barly talk to me,
an nothing seems to be the same.

And know after all this time,
I know what I whant,
but know is probably to late.


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on Sep. 22 2009 at 8:47 pm
RachyRach333 SILVER, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
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Thank you!..lol i'm glad it made your day :)

but how do I check out your drop messege..i havent had this acunt thing vary long lol so I dont no anything about it.

on Sep. 22 2009 at 8:43 pm
RachyRach333 SILVER, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
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Thank you!

Undiscovered said...
on Sep. 14 2009 at 8:09 am
Well id did not like the first part but the last man it just changed my perspective of the whole poem!! it was just stupendous!!!

on Sep. 13 2009 at 6:44 pm
Writerzhand GOLD, Ball Ground, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I wanna carry a piece of who I was before so when I hit the wall, I REALLY hit the wall.

I love the first line. I think this is how all of us girls feel at one point or another.

on Sep. 12 2009 at 7:48 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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This really made my day lol i loved it. i said i wasn't going to point out the obvious, but don't worry about spelling, i don't, mainly cuz i am a bad at it though :) its always the meaning that counts ;) i love it tho my bf of almost 7 months broke up with me over email tonight and this is how i feel to a tee.

<3,

Kayla

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Schubster said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 8:59 pm
haha i made a typo :P

Schubster said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 8:59 pm
I like the words a theme A TON!!! :) all you really need to do is fix the typos. keep writing!

on Sep. 11 2009 at 4:31 pm
Faithband3 BRONZE, Westbury, New York
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The poem is nice, but I personally don't like thew way you broke the rules of grammar. You need to master the rules before you can break them correctly and you just haven't mastered the m yet. Nice point though.

writer11 said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 2:01 pm
yesm i think you should have done spell check. But i really do love this poem, it reminds me of a thing i have witha guy too.

Emmalee SILVER said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 10:47 am
Emmalee SILVER, Rayville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is what happens when you're busy making other plans. - John Lennon

Spell check is always nice.

fujipie said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 10:14 am
w-o-w! this is something i'd called a gd poem...i lk the way the poet compsing this poem...bt, the spelling real sux=.="

on Sep. 11 2009 at 9:11 am
x.kelly.x BRONZE, Wherethewildthingsare., Other
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Whant? Okay,spell-check hun. But this is amazing! Keep up the good work (:

on Sep. 11 2009 at 6:47 am
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

thank you so much for writing this! it's exactly how i feel!

on Sep. 9 2009 at 3:19 pm
ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
To make a difference in the world, you have to be different from the world.

this is written really well. just as a pointer you might want to try watching your spelling. but still great job, keep at it :]]

on Sep. 8 2009 at 5:45 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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this is rly good. i feel this way about my exboyfriend. well done


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