The Light in Darkness

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I envy the blind man.

Who sees life and death
And nothing in between.

Who knows beauty and pain
Without ever seeing it.

Who measures freedom and captivity
Differently than I.

For my eyes are liars.
Deceitful liars.
Deceitful, abandoning liars.

Deceiful, abandoning liars
That give me hope and despair
In the blink of an eye.

Who cheated me of sight
By giving me sight.

Who caged me with bars
And called it a blessing.

Who punish me with change
Without reparation.

I envy the blind man.

The innocent,
Self serving
Blind man.





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linkroxsox said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 11:17 am
That was very serious and powerful nice job.
 
Anjo! said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 4:09 pm
OH my gosh! wow! That was... AMAZING. that really moved me. Keep writing. that is so deep, like no other. Wow, is all i can say. Thank you so much for sharing
 
Kat11 said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 12:49 pm
wow... liked it - made me think...
i esp. like the section "who knows beauty and pain without ever seeing it"
we base so much on sight and this poem just made me think about importance of sight and wonder why it has so much power...
keep it up!
 
Regisky10 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 11:57 am
This was absolutely marvelous. It's like reading an old poem in modern form. Keep it up!
 
So-calledLife This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 8:06 am
this is a really interesting way to look at life...but kinf of depressing.
 
james GONZALES said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 4:42 am
i think your poem was great. you did a really good job on capturing the perspective of the blind man. i want to see more from you hahhaha lol well anyways keep up the bomb poetry
 
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