Precarious Love.

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Venom aimlessly roaming my palms.
Invading solitude’s secret.
Stealing aged wisdom.
A thief.

Cancer deliberately consuming my breath.
Battering stability’s sway.
Quivering blind silence.
An assault.

Acid carelessly burning my flesh.
Blazing Sabbath’s stance.
Searing abstract wealth.
A wildfire.

Poison foolishly dancing along my spine.
Teasing submission’s surface.
Provoking complacent power.
A scam.

Love like parasitic toxin.

You’re words.
Not mine.





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iPonder said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 4:43 pm
i loved the feeling I got while reading this. this could really touch a lot of people. A unstable/unsteady Love.
 
Fangz said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 7:41 am
Could you explain the metaphors? I'm curious as to how you put this together in your mind.
 
lexi10824 said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 1:09 pm
This is amazing. :) Stuff like this makes me realize how talented some people are with writing. GREAT JOB. Keep writing please.
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 11:39 am
i think this poem is so beautifully written. I LOVE IT! Words can't describe what ran through my head everytime i read a new line. keep writing!
 
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