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the towel wrapped around
hangs, no breasts, no hips
just twelve ribs and
a stomach indented
bright pink nail paint
as if to distract
us from what we see,
the sallow, sunken face
her bottle-dyed hair
the only weight on her body,
what does she see
in those poorly veneered eyes?
does she see all the knobs
of her bird-hollowed bones,
or the chubby little kid
who was always picked
last in gym class?

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bethanyebethanyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 24, 2013 at 9:29 pm
Wow, I love this! It's so good.  This is really amazing. Oh, and we both live in East Tennessee!!
 
chastity said...
May 21, 2010 at 1:10 pm
wow this is so great!!!!
 
imawriter? said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 8:13 pm
Wow. The topic is somewhat disturbing, but I liked it. You shed a little light for a subject that is avoided and ignored. Great job!
 
Muntaha J. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 4:53 pm
I can somewhat really relate to this. Thanks for reminding me. =)
 
Stephanie L. said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 3:20 am
made me think nice!
 
sallysunshine said...
Aug. 13, 2009 at 3:36 am
I like the poem it reminds me of the time I was in 6 grade.
 
Shannon_McCauley said...
Jul. 31, 2009 at 7:58 am
Good poem... very detailed but very eerie.. if thats whats you were going for then good job... but yea good job... read my poetry if you want
 
Sirenna G. said...
Jul. 21, 2009 at 12:05 am
UUmm wow....a very deep throught circles my mind after reading this...
 
Melinda L. said...
Jul. 17, 2009 at 4:26 pm
Wow, that was...slightly disturbing. I loved it, though. Great job! Keep writing!
 
Like*Whoa!!! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 1:23 am
it's interestingg, i like that it wasnt in 1st person like most poems about this topic usually are...somewhat disturbing, but it grabbed my attention. Good job ohh and check out my work pleasee:)
 
Christian R. said...
Jul. 12, 2009 at 1:33 pm
this is Amazing! good point!!
 
aussie65 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 11, 2009 at 8:09 pm
It was touching, and very well written. But it also seemed like a topic I have seen done over and over, or something i would have to read in health class. But that aside, your imagery was disturbing as the subject, and i enjoyed it.
 
LilJ<3 said...
Jul. 7, 2009 at 11:43 pm
i liked this. it had a sort of creepy edge to it but i think thats what completes it. great job.
 
Sarah B. said...
Jul. 3, 2009 at 5:09 am
This is a very good piece. I agree, it's slightly disturbing, but definitely a style i love to write and read. Inspirable.
 
HurricaneHaley said...
Jun. 28, 2009 at 10:45 pm
awesome:)
 
Alyssa-Rose P. said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 6:52 pm
heyy love the poem. it's rather eerie (:
 
Ian G. said...
Jun. 24, 2009 at 8:19 pm
Hmm...very disturbing...i like it :)
 
Courtney B. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 24, 2009 at 1:34 am
This amazes me. =]
Feel free to check out my work. =]
 
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