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     We promised that forever
We’d never grow too old
To dig up clay with our stubby
Fingernails, and let it cook
In the scorching summer sun,
And bite our lips with concentration
As we pound down spades
In an intense game of spit,
And lie perfectly still together
Until we fell asleep under a castle
Of sheets and beach chairs.
We didn’t know that forever
Was as empty as the teacups
We sipped from and as real
As the games we dreamed up.



This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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aeb119 said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 9:22 pm:
please make a continuation of this please so that it will make it easier i think i may perform the song from your poem with my BFFs
 
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aeb119 said...
Sept. 7, 2010 at 9:15 pm:
hey that was so good i hope i become a singer or song writer and maybe i can make it into a song because i wrote it in my song book and tried singing it it sounds so beautiful!!! : D
 
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rzbaker said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 10:40 pm:
wow, that was really good! My favorite part was the last couple of lines, kinda a little twist at the end. . . it made me gasp for sure! tee hee but I also like you spacing and were yo u placed your pauses. . . were well thought out!
 
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Twilightnme said...
May 21, 2009 at 3:44 am:
Wow! Hmmm... I like it. Very springy and nice. Great details too! Woo Hoo!
 
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Vincent C. said...
May 21, 2009 at 12:46 am:
This captures so accurately the essence of what I'm feeling right now.
 
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bookhugger14 said...
May 20, 2009 at 9:14 pm:
i luvvv the figurative language and it sounds just like what i did when i was little!!! great job :)
 
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Olympians said...
May 20, 2009 at 12:20 pm:
that is very good:]
 
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