Girl In My Sleep This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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     (There I’m in myself and cannot speak but to charm you
And hear the friction of your every move.) You
Flit from my subterranean garden to the fleshy salty
real of waking and back so seamlessly. While above you
one moment I suddenly find myself smaller
and (so small) see so smallest; say, I love you.


This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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sunnyandsugar This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 9, 2014 at 7:43 pm
Amazing imagery! Very well written, congrats!
 
Marissagrl2012 said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 5:38 pm
Very good! :) Did you base your poem on real experiences?
 
alfavetta said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 9:44 pm
I love your word choices. The set up of the poem is interesting and I really like how you started with the parenthesis. I would just change the punctuation of ";say, I love you."
 
Alice28 said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 4:42 pm
i like this poem..i had to read it over and over again to finally get it but its really good.
 
Layton said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 1:46 pm
I really like this alot dude. It great, I totally get the emotion and what you're trying to say. Keep it up.
 
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