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Pond

April 11, 2019
By charlie_is_cool BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
charlie_is_cool BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Pond

The essence of

My childhood

Like a second

Home

So majestic

It makes the viewer forget

The goal

Of what they are to achieve

But if you stare at it closely

It stares right at

You

Reminding the admirer

Their true beauty

Its colors

Flow like they are

On a canvas

So blue the admirer gets lost

Like the sky

So easy to get lost

The clouds go by reminder

The admirer

Past memories

Good and bad

Light and dark

Warm and cold

Pain and comfort

So many ways to describe the

FEELINGS

The memory ripples

Over and over

Just like the blue abyss

That the admirer is getting lost

In

Like a

Kid with his new T.V.

So confused

It is

Not sure where to

Go

Where steer

Pushed around by the

Little inhabitants

They swirl

Around in

And

Out

Repeating the ripple

The cycle

But they are

Too youthful

To understand its true beauty

But the beauty

Is up

To the admirer

But what is the admirer

What do you think

What do you know?


The author's comments:

What this poem means to me is it talks about a pond house my familie owns. It shows all the good times and describes all the aspects of the pond. What does it mean to you?


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Koolkid09 said...
on Apr. 23 2019 at 11:49 am
Koolkid09, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Wow very nice job young man, we like your work and we would like to pursue a career with you, the syle that you write is so impeccable. We would love to have you on the writing team.


Sincerely, TeenInk

on Apr. 23 2019 at 11:46 am
TheoTheThird BRONZE, Washinton, Kansas
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this is a poem of well goodness. Keep up the good work (thumbs Up) M is my hero!!

on Apr. 23 2019 at 11:45 am
Kiddo1234 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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wow nice job!!!

on Apr. 23 2019 at 11:43 am
thecrazyes BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Nice!!

ElQuako BRONZE said...
on Apr. 23 2019 at 11:43 am
ElQuako BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
shoot for the moon even if you miss you'll die alone in space

great job totally random person that I have never met before