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Existence Falls Upon Us

March 13, 2019
By FlightOfPiscine PLATINUM, Plano, Texas
FlightOfPiscine PLATINUM, Plano, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Irony [is] the song of a prisoner who's come to love his cage" - David Foster Wallace


Swimming through life in contorted motions and slicing maneuvers

Our existence falls down upon us in raindrops

Breezing, slicing through the air

Each hits the pavement

I let out a guttural scream

Whisper a sidelong phrase

Feel wires of eureka attach in my brain

I am nothing but the accumulated raindrops

 

Dry spells marked by desultory strolls

Along perrywinkle pavement, tongue parched

Hold a pencil the same way every day, 40 degrees

Then a raindrop hits — dagger lurch upright

 

Each smash on dry concrete

A movement of the body, the breath, the mind

I race forward in a sprint

Feet falling in unison with the drops

I race on, beckoning the rain

Inundate me with existence


The author's comments:

This poem is an example of what I like to call sublime dissonance, or the misinterpretation of something to the end that the viewer is overcome with a sense of beauty or profundity where none is actually there (or, the combination of intuitively unrelated descriptors, beyond the realm of reasonable metaphor, in a way that produces inexplicable beauty — this definition isn’t applicable here though).


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