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My face is smushed against the glass –
cheekbone and jawline numb from
the cold, and long hours spent pressed
against the window. Rhythmic breaths
create patches of fog along the contours of my nose and lips.

Out of the corner of my right eye
I catch glimpses of the landscape we
pass by, but I’ve seen it all before.
Concrete barriers and painted lines
keep my driver on course.

Beyond the asphalt and wildflower medians
sprawl cornfields, suburban neighborhoods,
vast parks. Perpetual movement fools me
and for a moment, I am stationary –
free to view the passing still frames
of others’ lives.

Another mile marker and tired eyes flutter –
the endless strings of telephone lines,
cow pastures and landfills blur together
as the lullaby resonating from the spinning
axles beneath my feet sings me to sleep again.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Mimi15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22 at 11:51 am:
Check out my poem "puddle-wonderful" :)
 
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BeautyFromPain21This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 31 at 2:41 pm:
The name is amazing in itself, and then the actual poetry...amazing
 
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Def_Leppard_fan120This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 25 at 9:42 pm:
This poem was AWESOME!!!!!!!! I loved it. Anyway come check out my profile. Leave a comment and rate it. I write action and adventure stories, or maybe when I get inspired a scary poem or story. There is more to come. See ya there Rock on dudes and dudettes
 
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blah_blah said...
Jan. 25 at 7:59 pm:
this poem was very unique and cool
 
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sydneyy said...
Jan. 25 at 10:10 am:
i love this . its so nice . i made one too . its a article .
 
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Ayme.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 25 at 8:08 am:
really, really awesome poem. can u check out my stuff?
 
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CalligraphicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 25 at 7:35 am:
I really liked the diction in this piece!
 
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WeAllBurnThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3 at 3:38 pm:
that was truly, amazing. just wow. speechless.
 
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GraniaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 5:32 pm:
This is great!
 
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artmantistThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 20, 2011 at 8:38 pm:
plz, check out my work. nice poem
 
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ShmelmoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 4:52 pm:
Wow...I really like this peice. It can relate to a lot of people, myself being one. Thanks for posting this. Could you check out some of my work please?? :)
 
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TotheSeaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 2:13 pm:
I've had these same thoughts on many a road trip. Very nice, thank you for putting them into words.
 
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Lexie96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 8:53 pm:
Aw, wish I could sit shotgun again. Start driving and suddenly you have to drive everyone everywhere. At least I do :) Think that anyone could check out my work? Please and thank you!
 
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Anonymous_7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 12:01 am:
You did a great job on this poem!  I feel this way sometimes. Would mind checking out my work? It would be much appreciated, thanks!
 
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PumpkinscoutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 15, 2011 at 5:54 pm:
Yes a good poem! I know the feeling...
 
the-tears-im-crying-dont-deserve-youThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 11:09 am :
why is it calle dshotgun slumer tho it has nothing to do with a shotgun
 
aimaginater replied...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 1:08 pm :
She's sitting shotgun. As in the front passenger seat of a car.
 
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MeaghanSeesStarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 15, 2011 at 9:11 am:

 THIS IS A GOOD POEM

 

 
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TheNovaClytie said...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 2:23 pm:
I CALL SHOTGUN! hehe. really great piece. reminds me of why my sister and i fight over shotgun all the time!
 
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Lola_BlackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 3:04 pm:
Beautifully said! I love how you captured the feeling of riding shotgun. The title was pretty catchy, too!
 
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TeKaila said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 11:43 am:
wow that was greattt :) I really could seee what you were trying to say
 
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purpleinkThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 10:08 am:
This is great! You really captured how it is to sit shotgun
 
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annexgreyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 7:30 am:
Beautiful.
 
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alwaysbrokenhearted said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 8:50 pm:
i totally love this poem. so many images are in my head as i read it. amazing job!!!!
 
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ElleNicole said...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 11:02 am:

I like this. =) Good job.

Check out my work?

 
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RaindropsCatcherThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 6:02 am:
This was one amazingly described emotion/landscape. It made me nostalgic, made my heart ache for home. Amazing work.
 
renni replied...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 9:51 am :
i love this! very good :)
 
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PaRaNoRmAl627This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 8:13 pm:
this is beautiful. maybe im just in an emotional mood, but it made my heart ache for some reason
 
peace_love_beautyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 6, 2011 at 10:05 am :
Aboslutely LOVE this poem. So creative and well-written.
 
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ohmakemeoverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 4:36 pm:
I can really relate to this poem!  Nice, title, too.
 
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naiya.2011 said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 6:19 pm:
i love this poem....
 
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Hotaru said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 3:32 pm:
Your peom was good and seems to carry many different ideas within it. This poem is interesting to read. I admit, I was confused at first about what your title meant. But, thankfully from the comments below I realized my mistake at over analizing it.
 
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Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 3:28 pm:
This is a great poem!
 
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TeenageParadise_114 said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 9:20 am:
you are a poetic genius
 
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Basketball23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 2:30 pm:
I REALLY liked this!!!  I love how you described the fog..."patches of fog along the countours of my nose and lips."  I LOVED THAT PART!!!
 
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jeanwolf said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 7:42 pm:

good, keep it up!!

take a look at my work plz!!

 
JMThe-one replied...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 12:19 pm :
Me Too. lol
 
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josephdamian said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 7:42 pm:
That was amazing
 
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ParafreakThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 7:17 pm:
i like it :)
 
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foreverpoetryguyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 12:23 pm:
Amazing poem.
 
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JMThe-one said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 11:41 am:
Best I've seen on here in a while. Says a lot since I'm really critical.
 
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alymarie3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 11:43 am:
i'm a little confused, but i do like ur choice of words
 
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Maxwell said...
Dec. 25, 2010 at 5:27 pm:
I believe the title is referring to where the narrator is sitting: in the passenger's seat of the vehicle (shotgun).
 
Love4All replied...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 10:58 am :
i hadnt thought about it that way but now that you point it out, it makes a lot of sense
 
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KingkhaosThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 4:44 pm:
could be too that the sleep was "sudden", so it was likened to a shotgun blast
 
knifecalledlust replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 3:21 am :
no, its called shotgun slumber because shes in the passenger seat of the car. or "shot gun."
 
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anonmyous said...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 1:57 pm:
i liked it! great use of imagery! Good Job!!!
 
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xXvannieXx said...
Nov. 25, 2010 at 2:41 pm:
I really loved this poem, but I don't get the title?
 
silentvocal replied...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 11:32 am :
im tryin to figure the title out aswell. lol-maybe its just a title open for interpretation-it seems sybolic in relation to the poem to me... :)
 
anonmyous replied...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 1:56 pm :
its like in the seat beside the driver is called 'shotgun' and they're fallign asleep, so the tittle makes sense.
 
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