Runaway MAG

March 5, 2009
By Ryann. BRONZE, Hastings, Michigan
Ryann. BRONZE, Hastings, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Electric hills and mountain tops
Where runaways run far
Just run away with me, my dear
Uncover who we are
Beneath the stars and blanket black
We lie and watch the moon
I’d lie with you forever more
And sing the same night’s tune

I’ll keep you far from war and such
And hold you close tonight
I’ll give you all that I can give
And try to be your light
So run away with me, my dear
And bring me all your love
You’re the girl from all the movies
The one that I’ve dreamt of.


The author's comments:
This poem was writen about a girl who makes me very happy.

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on Apr. 23 2014 at 7:29 pm
Rebel21 PLATINUM, St. Catharines, Other
20 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where there is desire, there is gonna be a flame,
Where there is a flame someone's bound to get burned.
Just because it burns doesn't mean you're gonna die,
You've got to get up and try.

Beautiful poem

Bubbs GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2013 at 3:07 am
Bubbs GOLD, Rowlands Gill, Other
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be so good that they can't ignore you."

Aweeesome! She's one lucky girl

on Jan. 11 2013 at 11:07 am
MarieAntoinette2014 DIAMOND, Scottsburg, Indiana
54 articles 2 photos 238 comments

Favorite Quote:
Isn't it ironic? We ignore the ones who adore us, adore the ones who ignore us, love the ones who hurt us, and hurt the ones that love us.

Aw, that's so sweet. Did you show this to that girl? I think she'd be ecstatic to see it.

on Nov. 22 2012 at 2:33 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
224 articles 0 photos 117 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

This is so sweet! I loved this! Great job.

on Mar. 27 2012 at 3:26 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

So adorable---and so sweet. I read it over and over again four times! THe rhythm was great~

on Feb. 29 2012 at 3:45 pm
Paige16Curtis SILVER, Cardington, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
If it is to be, it is up to me

 I love it:)

on Dec. 25 2011 at 5:56 pm
fictitious-quandary GOLD, Orlando, Florida
18 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
Knowing is not enough; we must apply.
Willing is not enough; we must do.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

"Whether you think you can or you think you can't, you're right"
- Henry Ford

Great Job.

on Sep. 28 2011 at 9:39 pm
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
16 articles 0 photos 98 comments
speechless. just amazing, really.

on Apr. 5 2011 at 12:44 pm
WaterGirl23 BRONZE, Nutley, New Jersey
4 articles 5 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them." -William Shakespeare

i love it! it's so beautiful & that girl is very lucky. if you haven't already, you should show her this ;)

ALM007 ELITE said...
on Apr. 2 2011 at 9:56 pm
ALM007 ELITE, São Paulo, Colorado
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I accidently gave you 4 stars, but I'd give you 6 if I could. It was a great poem.

cloudskater1 said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 9:30 pm
this poem is so beautiful. full of meaning, and the beat was just right: it flowed like a song:) keep writing!!!

on May. 20 2010 at 8:28 am
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
16 articles 2 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Oh no...my sight's beginning to blur...how dare you :) I love this poem, very beautiful and sweet.

on May. 20 2010 at 8:00 am
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And I'll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I've found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I've lost everything."-mayday parade

aawwwwwww. i love it. does she know? i would love to have a poem like this about me! :)

on Feb. 4 2010 at 3:50 pm
I completely loved it. Everything was perfect. Congrats on getting published, and keep writing.

on Jan. 29 2010 at 3:05 pm
swimmergirlxo21 PLATINUM, Monroe, Connecticut
23 articles 0 photos 9 comments
Wow this poem is very touching. it makes me wish i had someone that really cares about me in my life.<3

AmnyR BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 9:29 pm
AmnyR BRONZE, Clifton, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 134 comments

Favorite Quote:
To the world, you may be just one person, but to one person, you may be the whole world. ~unknown

this is beautiful

on Jan. 25 2010 at 6:03 am
ephemeral_dream GOLD, Easterton Sands, Other
11 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you know that place between asleep and awake, the place where you can still remember dreaming? thats where i love you peter pan, thats where i'll be waiting" Tinkerbell

really beautiful! and so touching, well done on getting published :)

x

on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:33 pm
jacked_up_sharpie GOLD, Fort Worth, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Talk when you are angry, and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret."

i really like this. makes me wish it was me :D bahaha. well, i think yuu should change the "Such" part to something. [: Really good though.!

Malia BRONZE said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 12:46 pm
Malia BRONZE, Birmingham, Other
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments
This is so touching, and you deserved to be #1. I came up #2 for my poem on this section today.

I hope you find that girl if you havn't already!

~blueroses~ said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 5:08 pm
~blueroses~, Summerville, South Carolina
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Congratulations on getting published, you deserved that. This is an amazing poem!

(:

-skye




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