Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Mar. 4 2009 at 1:01 am
aidenfantastic BRONZE, Glen Burnie, Maryland
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I L O V E I T;

on Mar. 3 2009 at 11:25 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

FABULOUS! i wish i could write like that!

on Mar. 3 2009 at 10:05 pm
Love it, guys sometime don't realize they can be good jerks!

secret101 said...
on Mar. 3 2009 at 8:09 pm
secret101, Farmington, New Mexico
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i love this piece, totally reminds me of my jerk

kissing dawn said...
on Mar. 2 2009 at 7:13 pm
Wow really inspiring...i hat elove from a far

on Mar. 2 2009 at 6:01 pm
KaylaRock BRONZE, Fairmont, West Virginia
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so believable! and so relateable! i really liked it.

xjustlistenx said...
on Mar. 2 2009 at 1:59 am
i relate all the way

great piece keep writing!

on Feb. 28 2009 at 9:42 pm
EternityBroken GOLD, Hooker, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
It is impossible to love and be wise.

i can really relate to this piece... sadly :~(

on Feb. 28 2009 at 5:17 am
This is the BOMB!!!

(very good) :D

on Feb. 28 2009 at 1:11 am
Toxic_Wasteland PLATINUM, Andowver, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life... It Goes On."~Robet Frost

i really like this... beautifully done.. great work (just to fill you in i have to put great cause if i say good i think it means bad so yeah haha)

on Feb. 28 2009 at 12:24 am
i can really relate to this poem good job keep it up i hope to see more of your work

angel head said...
on Feb. 26 2009 at 8:40 pm
amazing, and very relatable

on Feb. 26 2009 at 4:50 pm
Shelby Vincent, Louisville, Kentucky
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good rhymes and FUNNY!

Wmina said...
on Feb. 26 2009 at 4:55 am
Wmina, Boston, Massachusetts
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shows what love can do to you, but you can't help the feelings you have.

i kept reading it over a few times. great work!

cortland10 said...
on Feb. 25 2009 at 10:16 pm
this is really good!!




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