Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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KaylaRock said...
Mar. 2, 2009 at 6:01 pm
so believable! and so relateable! i really liked it.
 
xjustlistenx said...
Mar. 2, 2009 at 1:59 am
i relate all the way
great piece keep writing!
 
Patience C. said...
Feb. 28, 2009 at 9:42 pm
i can really relate to this piece... sadly :~(
 
Syriastine Princess said...
Feb. 28, 2009 at 5:17 am
This is the BOMB!!!
(very good) :D
 
courtney B. said...
Feb. 28, 2009 at 1:11 am
i really like this... beautifully done.. great work (just to fill you in i have to put great cause if i say good i think it means bad so yeah haha)
 
poetryluver101 said...
Feb. 28, 2009 at 12:24 am
i can really relate to this poem good job keep it up i hope to see more of your work
 
angel head said...
Feb. 26, 2009 at 8:40 pm
amazing, and very relatable
 
Shelby V. said...
Feb. 26, 2009 at 4:50 pm
good rhymes and FUNNY!
 
PitchBlackCeiling said...
Feb. 26, 2009 at 4:55 am
shows what love can do to you, but you can't help the feelings you have.
i kept reading it over a few times. great work!
 
cortland10 said...
Feb. 25, 2009 at 10:16 pm
this is really good!!
 
kaykaylabay replied...
May 3, 2010 at 3:17 pm
OMG this is like the best!!!!! why is it that all the guys i've ever like have been jerks?!?!!?
 
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