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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Feb. 4 2010 at 6:39 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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That is so real and I've been through the same exact thing. The flow is beautiful, and you could tell you have a natural talent.

on Feb. 4 2010 at 5:20 pm
kittehjo BRONZE, Gibbs, Missouri
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Truely Amazing.

I can relate. :)

on Feb. 4 2010 at 5:12 pm
Crossingmyfingers SILVER, Mounds View, Minnesota
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I love this simplicity and flow... I love what you said in this...

on Feb. 4 2010 at 4:49 pm
SaraRoxsHerSox SILVER, McVeytown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Brochacho!"

Wow! Beautiful poem! Keep writing!

on Feb. 4 2010 at 3:49 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

I relate EXACTLY to this poem. And I know someone, too.

on Feb. 4 2010 at 3:28 pm
Maddiewrites13 GOLD, Wolfeboro, New Hampshire
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Awesome...I love how well I can relate to it :)

on Feb. 4 2010 at 12:06 pm
violinistforlife SILVER, Thornton, Colorado
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This is amazing!!! I know someone who is just like that. Great job!!!

on Feb. 4 2010 at 12:14 am
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

this was amazingly constructed. it was so simple yet held so much emotion. it is beautiful! well done.

on Feb. 3 2010 at 8:47 pm
amber phillips BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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i totally agree!!! i love this poem.

GreenStage said...
on Feb. 3 2010 at 9:33 am
GreenStage, Ehrhardt, South Carolina
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I Love This Poem...because i can really relate to it...so great job with this one!

Your mom said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:30 am
This poem truly shows how you either fictionally like someone or like a real person. It is creative, and the rhyming sequence works well with your words. (*_*)

on Jan. 30 2010 at 2:41 pm
very creative and bittersweet. love the rhythm and the person speaking about the jerk they like/love/have a crush on. ^^ very cool! kudos!

Rabaya GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2010 at 11:03 am
Rabaya GOLD, Jamaica, New York
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WOW. I really liked this poem because i can so relate. Check out some of my work when you get the cahnce! =]

on Jan. 28 2010 at 9:13 pm
fiveinside2 BRONZE, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Don\'t tell me the sky\'s the limit if there are footprints on the moon.\"

Oh my gosh! I love this! The voice is so perfect. :) This is really great! :D

on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:27 pm
mz.gemini92 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
keep the one yew luv most 1st

i luv this poem it's very creative and different keep on writing and ill keep on listening

on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:08 pm
lemonygirl97 BRONZE, Fort Hunter, New York
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I love this poem like PeaveLoveME(: said keep on writing.

on Jan. 28 2010 at 5:46 am
PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I shall never give up, make believe is too much fun."

awesome! keep writing! everyone plz check out my work! :)

Mostly_Dead said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 7:51 pm
Mostly_Dead, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If you hadn't nailed it to the perch it would be pushing up the daisies. It's run down the curtain and joined the quiet invisible. This is an ex-parrot!" (Monty Python)

Good rhythm, and rhyme

on Jan. 27 2010 at 7:01 pm
andshesfearless GOLD, West Harrison, New York
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Favorite Quote:
when the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.
-jimi hendrix-

story of my life.

Jessica said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 7:54 pm
this poem perfectly describes my situation. a guy i know is just like girl describes it in the poem. I know hes a jerk but i still fall for him. i may think im strong but with him im weak. and for that he is a jerk...