Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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Ansi said...
on Oct. 9 2013 at 9:59 am
Love your poem. It was different but I loved it. Please do more! oh and what I loved it the most was the second verse.

Dea1605 GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2013 at 7:49 pm
Dea1605 GOLD, Salvador, Other
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Honestly, if the editors thought it was good enough to be in the magazine, why don't you just let it be? Imagine how happy this person was to see that his or her poem was published. Don't take that special feeling away because of your jealousy.

Taeve BRONZE said...
on Oct. 7 2013 at 2:13 pm
Taeve BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Be You And Just LIVE LIFE !

What made you write this ?

on Oct. 6 2013 at 6:44 pm
micshea99 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
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But it is the way that someone re-does a cliche theme that makes them a good writer!(: Love this!

on Oct. 6 2013 at 1:33 pm
micshea99 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
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This is beautiful and so true when you're young! Love it!!!

on Sep. 26 2013 at 8:04 am
r_dharrr SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's nothing more beautiful than authenticity. There's nothing uglier than transparency. Your imperfections make you perfect."
-Demi Lovato

Lovelovelove it.

on Sep. 23 2013 at 8:35 pm
liliazia PLATINUM, Boone, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people exist, that’s all."
-Oscar Wilde

I think....for the people who don't like it, just don't understand it. It's a good poem, but for some people it has no meaning. But maybe this girl has a deep meaning behind, which some people saw. And if you want to get published, go to the writers forum and ask for lots of votes on your work.

on Sep. 21 2013 at 1:03 am
NickieWickie BRONZE, Taoyuan, Other
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I agree also. I know many girls feel the same way so the poem seems relatable and mutual, but I don't really see why I deserves this much attention.

Mkath SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2013 at 8:16 pm
Mkath SILVER, Duluth, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Anyone Who thinks that Sunshine is Pure Happiness has Obviously Never Danced in the Rain"

I Know! I feel the same way! and then you also see those top rated poems on the first page of the website that are like 2 lines long and aren't really that deep at all  when there are so many other peoms that are longer and flow better and obviously had someones heart and soul poured into it and they barly get any attention at all!

on Sep. 9 2013 at 11:11 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Really? THIS has that any comments? THIS was published in the magazine? I mean, it's a good poem, but aside from the jerk part, there is just nothing special about this poem. So....please remind me how people see THIS as one of the best poems on the site, deserving such attention?

Alabian GOLD said...
on Sep. 3 2013 at 7:15 pm
Alabian GOLD, Limbo, Other
13 articles 2 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you can fly, don't stop at the sky cause there are footprints on the moon" - Owl City

This is such a sweet poem! The whole idea of her loving someone so much and then referring to him as a "jerk" is so perfect! 5/5!

on Aug. 29 2013 at 11:57 pm
TheMaskedPoet SILVER, Temple, Georgia
9 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I wish I could be a little less dramatic, like a Kennedy when Camelot went down in Flames." -Miranda Lambert

That's a really amazing poem. It's really awesome to see those feelings through a girls point of view instead of mine. GREAT JOB!

on Aug. 29 2013 at 11:11 pm
FilmEcho68 GOLD, Wentzville, Missouri
16 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When you want to succeed as bad as you want to breathe then you will be successful." -Unknown

I agree with you. I feel like this concept is overused. The idea is good, but when it is used all the time, it loses its wow factor. 

on Aug. 24 2013 at 10:04 pm
summergirl21 GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
13 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"So come with me, where dreams are born, and time is never planned. Just think of happy things, and your heart will fly on wings, forever, in Never Never Land!" -Peter Pan

This poem has always been a favorite, but I was wondering if anyone noticed the incredibly similar structure between this and the poem 10 Things I Hate About You from the 90's movie with Heath Ledger. Maybe I'm crazy, but I think they sound a lot alike. Nothing against this poem though. I love it!

on Aug. 16 2013 at 12:13 pm
NILAKSHI008 SILVER, PANIPAT, Other
6 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Good opinion once lost, is lost forever.

wow.... too good

on Aug. 14 2013 at 2:36 pm
Poetrylover_1 SILVER, Norh Charleston, South Carolina
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I dont necessarily like rhyming poems, but this poem is very nice, straight to the point and talks about a person that acceps the other for who they and loves everything about them.

on Aug. 12 2013 at 1:20 pm
jfsdifdisofnsdklvn BRONZE, Hanahan, South Carolina
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I don't really understand why this poem has gotten so much praise. It's simple and doesn't give any detail, as well as the fact that it rhymes. It's an overused concept (you're a jerk but I love you) and an elementary rhyme scheme. The lines "and yet you're the best jerk I see" i feel tie the poem together, but I still can't wrap my head around it. It's pretty, but I feel like it's something anybody could've done.

on Aug. 7 2013 at 6:07 pm
WatercolorWriter SILVER, Sykesville, Maryland
7 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world." --Unknown

"Be the change you want to see in the World." --Mahatma Gandhi

I love this poem!!! :)

on Jul. 29 2013 at 10:38 am
CallMeAria PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
30 articles 27 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
EVERYTHING HAPPENS FOR A REASON :)

This is straight to the point, with simple, understandable language. I REALLY LIKE THIS :D

on Jul. 25 2013 at 8:01 pm
EmAngster00 SILVER, Calavi, Other
5 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
""You can’t be like me
But be happy that you cant
I see pain but I don’t feel it
I am like the old Tin Man.” - Tin Man, The Avett Brothers

Wow this was amazing! I love your rhythmic style and rhymes. And it's funny how i can completely relate to this. *_*




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