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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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dotsonboy99 said...
Nov. 1, 2012 at 11:10 am:
i liked the line . i love your cocky smile  
 
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sarah.small18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 18, 2012 at 9:40 am:
Very good flow. I liked it a lot.
 
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Morgan B. said...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 10:12 am:
The rhyming was unneeded, only a certain amount of words can ryhme. And you're hiding. I don't feel as if this guy is a jerk. This is petty and cliche. The repetition wasn't effective, I felt as if it was kind of redundant.
 
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NotWriting_Bazinga This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 11:13 am:
It is so simple... yet so intense. Totally relateable and sad. i love it.
 
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The_Quiet_GirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 12, 2012 at 7:32 pm:
Ah, yes. I had a "jerk" of my own before....As a matter of fact, I was engaged to him at one point...But I learned my lesson.  You did a wonderful job with this poem. :)
 
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tatertot15 said...
Oct. 10, 2012 at 2:05 pm:
Just as everyone else is saying, it is very easy to relate. I have a 'jerk' of my own
 
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stillhuman said...
Oct. 9, 2012 at 12:08 pm:
I love this poem because I think that all teenagers can relate. Very well written and the word choice was beautifully exicuted(:
 
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KeidraB said...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 8:33 am:
Awesome.....Wonderful Word Choice!!!
 
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remember16 said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 7:08 am:
this is amazing, i can relate to this.... !!!!!
 
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1doodlebug0 said...
Sept. 25, 2012 at 2:02 pm:
You just made me cry... that sounds just like my ex-boyfriend who is still in love with me and visa -versa...
 
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KayleeG said...
Sept. 19, 2012 at 9:25 am:
definatly one of my favorite poems!
 
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garshongjasmine said...
Sept. 17, 2012 at 10:37 am:
this is beautiful and well written
 
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bloodykittenz said...
Sept. 16, 2012 at 7:16 pm:
check out my posts! i really love writing and want feedback! ill read yours if you comment and rate!
 
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__katherene said...
Sept. 12, 2012 at 9:54 am:
this is really nice, and cute.
 
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Emin3mAC said...
Sept. 7, 2012 at 9:39 pm:
This is a VERY well done poem. Good job! 
 
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bethany stubbs said...
Sept. 3, 2012 at 7:34 pm:
I think that this poem is sweet
 
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SaraBearxo said...
Sept. 2, 2012 at 7:02 am:
I was in love with a jerk and this made my cry reading it:') you're a beautiful writer. 
 
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Aleboo said...
Aug. 26, 2012 at 3:53 am:
This was just perfect. Great job!
 
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Mimi15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2012 at 8:17 pm:
I am also completely head over heals for this jerky guy. You're a fantastic writer by the way. If you don't mind, I'd love to hear your opinion of my poem Broken Structure. Cheers. :)
 
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writer3499 said...
Aug. 16, 2012 at 9:12 am:
Fantastic!
 
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