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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Megs39 said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 11:15 am
ive been in this situation too....you really did a great job with this
 
girlpoet said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 10:31 am
I've been in that type of situation before and you took the words right out my mouth. Beautifully sad.
 
MisteriousAngel said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 10:18 pm
this is such a good poem. i think everyone can relate to it. i love it. cant wait to read your other ones ;P
 
we_are_sunscientists said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 6:10 pm
People who read twilight? Stop. It's tainting your writing.
 
singergurl12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 5:30 pm
LOL SOO TRU i love this
 
Christina This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 10:44 am
go read my other poems, maybe you'll end your life for real
 
Fallen4Ever replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 2:28 pm
You are a really good writer! You remind me alot of my friend! (Ina good way) Keep up the good work
 
gozochrissie said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 9:09 am
wow that was very interesting and yea we all love a precious jerk at one time...lol
 
James18 said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 7:52 am
Jerk,this was a very calming and soothing poem. The author showed their true feelings about that person which really touched my heart.
 
BleedingRose said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 10:14 am

Wow, do you people do that just for fun?  I've had fake users comment on my stuff before, and I just laugh at your immaturity.  But I'm curious, do you look for a certain poem to comment on, or is your retared little comment thing just on random poems?

And BTW, This is such a great poem i loved it!  :)

 
sweetheart13 said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 11:49 am

WOW... is all I have to say this poem is amazing it takes my breath away!!!

<3

 
llamachick replied...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 8:16 am
i loved this so much i used it for my school project, has so much meaning. <3
 
marmar18 said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 1:21 pm
wow i love this you are a awesome writer
 
silentvocal replied...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 9:32 pm
I always love when i see a poem speak purely from mindflow-it doesn't even matter what its about if it's "real"-i dont mean real as in fiction nonfiction but real like truly from you (the author) :) keep it up dude :P
 
Number3 said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 12:44 pm
wow! i can too relate to this!! your an awesome writer!!!
 
sweetheart13 said...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 6:31 am

wow this is really good!!! I love the rhyming to it as like JUST-A-JOY said my favorite line is also you precious jerk and you yet your the best jerk I see. 

<3

 

 
bdwuiABCAWI replied...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 10:59 am

hey wats gewd

 

 
poptartz said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 8:23 pm

wow this is deppressing but ok

 

 
justbe-3 said...
Nov. 6, 2010 at 4:19 pm
this poem explains all the reasons why we put up with jerks!
 
ijustbeolivia said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 8:33 am
i like it!it has nice rhythm to it. i can relate to this sometimes.
 
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