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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 28, 2010 at 4:04 pm
This is INCREDIBLE! I love it!
 
NightOwl said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 9:43 pm
That is so clever! And also so true! very creative. great writing!
 
l_emmalyn07 said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 5:25 pm
*REALLY* good!! plz check out some of my poems when they get approved:))
 
Trulie said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 3:06 pm
LOVED IT! keep writing.
 
Breeyup12 said...
Nov. 25, 2010 at 4:03 pm
Good!! :) really true! <3
 
kebruiser said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 6:46 pm
Great poetry and I love the message sent out with this and the description, it's fantastic!
 
Meli14 replied...
Nov. 24, 2010 at 1:51 am
I Am Free Read please!Rate thanks(:
 
Love_is_Endless said...
Nov. 21, 2010 at 9:53 am
I love this poem! It's so beautiful! Your my favorite Author yet on Teenink! Keep it up! I would love to hear more!
 
SideraCaeli said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 9:52 pm
Really good! Very to the point with a little bit of comedy! Overall, one of the best sonnets I've read so far.
 
echome94 said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 2:57 pm
Lovely poem, five stars definatly. My family is from Clifton Forge, i understand you cant reply but still its so cool. Your town is really small and i love the old highschool. We think its haunted.
 
watching_light said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 10:16 pm
I really loved your poem! your rythm was really balanced and enjoyable to read :D
 
ItsMeKenzie said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 6:17 pm
I can totally relate, this poem just put into words exactly what I've been thinking in my head
 
red-i13 said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 6:16 pm
great poem. it is going on my favorites ASAP
 
rayzdboss said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 2:20 pm
pretty nice poem lol
 
anonmyous said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 11:20 am
good choices! bittersweet goodness!
 
Megs39 said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 11:15 am
ive been in this situation too....you really did a great job with this
 
girlpoet said...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 10:31 am
I've been in that type of situation before and you took the words right out my mouth. Beautifully sad.
 
MisteriousAngel said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 10:18 pm
this is such a good poem. i think everyone can relate to it. i love it. cant wait to read your other ones ;P
 
we_are_sunscientists said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 6:10 pm
People who read twilight? Stop. It's tainting your writing.
 
singergurl12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 5:30 pm
LOL SOO TRU i love this
 
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