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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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I_need_to_be_fixed said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 12:50 pm
woww i can totally relate to this....lovely :)
 
Karma_Crow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 8:16 am
Completly love it ^^
 
Emmadilemma said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 2:22 pm
Completely true!
 
Marissa S. said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 6:23 am
i love this poem it is soooo true and amazing!!
 
jacqui95 said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 8:19 am
this reminds me of someone that i know and its all true!~!!!
 
Athena95 said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 5:29 pm

I love this poem its amazing

 

 
Shanjello said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 9:16 am
Amazing poem flows nicely!!!!! Very true about lots of guys lolzzzz. :) XD
 
kelsey2097 said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 9:05 pm
Oh my gosh! you are really sweet and good
 
LunarRainstorm said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 8:02 pm
Your poem is concise, yet beautiful in its simplicity. I like how you describe what girls, often, secretly think about those we are attracted to-- those physically gorgeous guys whose character, unfortunately, do not match their dreamy appearances.
 
lovetowrite22 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 5:04 pm
great poem! i liked that it was simple but still very effective. good job!:)
 
journalist_NY said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 1:50 pm
This is really good; and so true. I like your word choices. :)) keep writing.
 
AliMac said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 11:42 am
I really liked this poem. I agree with what Jones said. I started this and was like, "Is this gonna be about the perfect guy?" I love how its not
 
ashleyn said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 9:48 am
Love it! keep writing!
 
WindDancer said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 6:58 am
Great job! Very relatable. Keep writing. :)
 
super_nerd This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 8:50 pm
You make me glad I signed up on this site :)
 
Annab said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 11:24 am
I like this a lot! very well done! :)
 
greenday21luvsbilliejoe replied...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 1:27 pm
i know a guy just like this
 
musiqqlvr31 replied...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 3:24 am
me too...though i dont like love him or anything
 
keannnie said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 10:42 am
omgggg. this is like;; amazing! i can really relate to this!
 
WerewolfWriting said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 8:09 pm
The love that shines in this poem really touches the reader. Great work!
 
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