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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Karma_Crow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 8:16 am:
Completly love it ^^
 
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Emmadilemma said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 2:22 pm:
Completely true!
 
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Marissa S. said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 6:23 am:
i love this poem it is soooo true and amazing!!
 
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jacqui95 said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 8:19 am:
this reminds me of someone that i know and its all true!~!!!
 
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Athena95 said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 5:29 pm:

I love this poem its amazing

 

 
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Shanjello said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 9:16 am:
Amazing poem flows nicely!!!!! Very true about lots of guys lolzzzz. :) XD
 
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kelsey2097 said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 9:05 pm:
Oh my gosh! you are really sweet and good
 
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LunarRainstorm said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 8:02 pm:
Your poem is concise, yet beautiful in its simplicity. I like how you describe what girls, often, secretly think about those we are attracted to-- those physically gorgeous guys whose character, unfortunately, do not match their dreamy appearances.
 
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lovetowrite22 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 5:04 pm:
great poem! i liked that it was simple but still very effective. good job!:)
 
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journalist_NY said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 1:50 pm:
This is really good; and so true. I like your word choices. :)) keep writing.
 
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AliMac said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 11:42 am:
I really liked this poem. I agree with what Jones said. I started this and was like, "Is this gonna be about the perfect guy?" I love how its not
 
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ashleyn said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 9:48 am:
Love it! keep writing!
 
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WindDancer said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 6:58 am:
Great job! Very relatable. Keep writing. :)
 
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super_nerd This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 8:50 pm:
You make me glad I signed up on this site :)
 
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Annab said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 11:24 am:
I like this a lot! very well done! :)
 
greenday21luvsbilliejoe replied...
Jan. 20, 2011 at 1:27 pm :
i know a guy just like this
 
musiqqlvr31 replied...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 3:24 am :
me too...though i dont like love him or anything
 
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keannnie said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 10:42 am:
omgggg. this is like;; amazing! i can really relate to this!
 
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WerewolfWriting said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 8:09 pm:
The love that shines in this poem really touches the reader. Great work!
 
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sunnyhunny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 8:20 pm:
Wow wow wow.  Love this.  Amazing.
 
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