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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Mar. 20 2011 at 6:03 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Wow. This is great! I'm sure its gotten to the point where you can't even keep up with all the comments! :P I hope one of my poems can reach this level where the audience is in the thousands! Great work :)

TheGoodTwin said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 10:07 pm
TheGoodTwin, Fort Mill, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them.

--Shakespeare

Buy a dictionary, Yasminno_O, and read it please. 

on Mar. 17 2011 at 11:12 pm
thecrystalbudz PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
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i love it!

on Mar. 15 2011 at 7:17 pm
tinabeana24 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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OMG i love this poem i can SOOOO relate to it!! Good Job i also love how like the reader can feel/get wat ur saying keep up the good work!! (:

on Mar. 15 2011 at 6:01 pm
Unkown_Yasminnx3 BRONZE, Corona, New York
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is Just a word until Some one comes along and gives it a meaning"

these is really good, I love how you discribe the feelings

Pickles-29 said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 8:07 pm
Pickles-29, Boise, Idaho
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Loved it!!!

l.iney DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:36 pm
l.iney DIAMOND, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
100% of shots not taken won't go in. -Wayne Gretzky

This is really good and I can sense the feeling in it.

ps check out some of my stuff please :)


colas BRONZE said...
on Mar. 10 2011 at 5:30 pm
colas BRONZE, Albuquerque, New Mexico
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
There is only one person in this world that is you and that is you. No one can make or break who you are so live your life to the fullest!

wow so true i fall for these gays all the time

on Mar. 8 2011 at 6:29 pm
WritingJulia SILVER, Binghamton, New York
6 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Kind words can be short and easy to say, but their echoes are truly endless." -Mother Theresa

I love it!!  How long ago did u compose it? 

jellyboo said...
on Mar. 8 2011 at 1:40 pm
you are a good writer and i hope that you get a cute boy even if he is a jerk.

Maximum BRONZE said...
on Mar. 7 2011 at 7:29 pm
Maximum BRONZE, Lilburn, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Go to @#!*%
-Sure thing. Want me to save you a seat?

It's funny-for lack of better word-how often the above happens! Sad, but true!

on Mar. 7 2011 at 6:50 pm
ambermoore GOLD, Boone, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Live.Laugh.Love
Drag my name through the mud & I still come out clean-lil wayne

This is really good

on Mar. 7 2011 at 5:32 pm
Bookworm7 SILVER, Middletown, New York
8 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be not afraid of greatness: some are born great, some achieve greatness, and some have greatness thrust upon them. -Willian Shakespeare

This is exactly my predicament. Please keep writinf. This was really great.

on Mar. 7 2011 at 4:15 pm
AlyssandriaFlamel SILVER, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
“Nothing can possibly be as cute as David Tennant holding a kitten. Cause the kitten is adorable and then David Tennant is adorable and then your head explodes and you wake up on the floor of your bedroom twenty minutes later with a sock in one hand and a crushed diet coke can in the other. If you’re lucky. If not, you die of fangasm. Although if that happened to me because of Jack, I could probably get Death by Torchwood on my death certificate….”

Right down to the brown hair and amazing eyes. :P Wonderful, and the best description of love that there really is. Not the happiness, but the pain.

on Mar. 7 2011 at 1:03 pm
bigdreamsbigheart PLATINUM, Ypsilanti, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
\\\"When I stand before god I want to have no talent left so I can say,\\\"I used everything you gave me\\\"\\\"

Wow! Very good. I am impressed. It's hard to find a good love poem. And this is definatly it.

It totally describes some guys! STUPID. huh lol.

Read mine, and give feedback. thanks :)


daniec SILVER said...
on Mar. 7 2011 at 11:09 am
daniec SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dancing faces you towards heaven which ever way you turn. Dance for Christ because you can...

OMG i love this poem im living that right now even though he isnt a brunette.And its in the same catagory as my poem Why i cry read and post a comment. Please

on Mar. 7 2011 at 8:59 am
You arent all jerks! girls can be stupid too!(: reallyy, its easier for guys than girls! girls get a bad rep for just kissing someone sometimes.. guys can sleep around and still be popular and not called names other than a "player" which is no big deal!(: so dont think that!! girls just get annoyed easier than guys cus we get judged too hard! and most guys come off to be jerks because of this.

Ddog said...
on Mar. 6 2011 at 12:07 pm
I like this poem. This reminds me of a friend I have who is atracted to a jerk. Are we call atracted to stupid guys!? Any way, good job:)

on Mar. 3 2011 at 6:32 pm
Jakson5Freak BRONZE, Indian Trail, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
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its a great poem. really great.

Get $ said...
on Mar. 3 2011 at 4:43 pm
That poem reminds me of my X girl haha pretty kewl!!!