Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Jun. 25 2011 at 1:29 pm
Alex_Durham GOLD, Vineland, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

This is great!

on Jun. 25 2011 at 12:51 pm
introducingshelby GOLD, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"People change so you can learn to let go, things go wrong so you can appreciate them when they go right, and things fall apart so better things can fall together."
-Marilyn Monroe

You speak the truth...

Akz13 SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 7:44 am
Akz13 SILVER, Phoenix, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is but an adventure, the more you seek, the more surprises you find."

lol its as if  you read my mind!

inkflowerKNC said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 2:33 pm
inkflowerKNC, Townsend, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
"When at first you don't succeed, try, try again."

this actually made me laugh. in a good way. i like it because its realistic. :D

on Jun. 10 2011 at 12:19 pm
brender1017 BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
things happen for a reason

i lie this and i can so relate to it !! i loved this !!

on Jun. 9 2011 at 5:05 pm
PassionFruit SILVER, Templeton, California
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I like it, simple yet strong. As you can tell, a lot of people can relate, including myself :) It reads smoothly and inspires emotion in the reader, makes the poem feel personal. Great job! 

on Jun. 4 2011 at 11:17 am
RanaHewezi1998 SILVER, Ames, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"I may not have gone where I intended to go, but I think I've ended up where I needed to be."
-Douglas Adams

that's a really good peom and its deep and personal which makes it all the best!

on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:56 pm
Isabel96 BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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Your simplicity is really compelling. Tranquil yet emotional. 

RyanAD GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 8:55 pm
RyanAD GOLD, Grandville, Michigan
13 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Any one who ever gave his best, never regretted it."

that was really good. nice job!

on Jun. 3 2011 at 6:41 pm
IDKXmere13 SILVER, Old Forge, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
dream like you'll live forever live like you are going to die today!

Aww this is really good! :) i have a jerk with brown hair that im in love with too! :)

on Jun. 3 2011 at 12:28 pm
shinegirl24 BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"All, everything I understand, I understand only because I love." Leo Tolstoy

Aw.... I really like this. Nice job!

spency SILVER said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:38 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

this is brilliant...5/5

on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:08 am
forever.dancing SILVER, Shoreline, Washington
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soooooooo cute :)

gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:51 am
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

i think this is froma girls point of view.

gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:51 am
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

you just don't know good poetry when you see it.

gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:50 am
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
17 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

this is really good i can totally relate great job!!! keep it up

on Jun. 2 2011 at 7:44 pm
roliepoliezoie SILVER, Stamford, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Fall down seven times, stand up eight

My God, this is awesome. *Favorited!*

:)


on Jun. 2 2011 at 11:51 am
lovelele BRONZE, Burtom, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
love the ones who love you love the ones who hate you because either way it goes youre gonna need them

i loved this poem so much i used it for school lol for a poetry projcet

 


Brim369 SILVER said...
on Jun. 1 2011 at 11:03 am
Brim369 SILVER,
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i love this poem.  i read it every time i log on! great work!

on Jun. 1 2011 at 8:04 am
K.M.S.Shear BRONZE, Cherokee, Iowa
2 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some people think writing is a waist of their time. For me it’s a way to draw an image of myself through the painting of words."

great poem

 



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