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Jerk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Cortaysiaaaa. ;) said...
May 5, 2011 at 2:13 pm:
Ayeee, this was really good. I read this aloud to my class right? And they loved it. Good Job! Seriously, write more. Buhhh Byee. I love you<3 We should sooo chill sometime.
 
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Daniosopuppy said...
May 5, 2011 at 2:11 pm:
I am in love with your poem no joke! I show it to like everyone! It completely describes this guy that i know(; ahhh<3 legit this is Perfect<3
 
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bri-bear said...
May 4, 2011 at 5:31 pm:
I love this!!! sooo good :)
 
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SavvyCake1 said...
May 2, 2011 at 3:40 pm:

i like it. i think its great.

 

 
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PrettyLittleDarling said...
May 1, 2011 at 12:55 pm:
this is the perfect poem for me your writting just spoke everythink my heart is saying :) amazing
 
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FacebookAddict11 said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 1:17 pm:
I love this one, good use of rhymes by the way, Keep up the good work
 
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Rachael12 said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:48 am:
Great ending!! I really enjoyed reading your poem :)
 
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Katelyn V. said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:38 am:
SOO TRUE! I can relate as well! nicely worded:)
 
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ehascher said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:33 am:

Really good! I can totally relate. I love the second stanza :)

 

 
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jillster12 said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 9:29 pm:
Great, so true </3
 
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bridgey said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 11:37 am:
that was great! good job
 
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Dance4God77 said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 4:51 pm:
This is sooooo great! I feel for this poem. Haha love :)
 
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ArabQuest said...
Apr. 26, 2011 at 11:32 am:
OMG! I love your poem! Keep up the good work! :D
 
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jayroyy said...
Apr. 24, 2011 at 10:07 pm:
undrstood. (this thing has to hav at least ten words, but thats all i hav to say so im stalling. LOVE U!!)
 
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NayaHana said...
Apr. 24, 2011 at 1:25 pm:
I LOVE this. Great work :)
 
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PAOLA-ARLETTY said...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 10:42 pm:
OMG, i can so see your point with this.  Its like when people are massively annoyed with something a person has or does, but still, they cannot get enough of them!  its perfect!  I LOVE THISSS
 
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Alise said...
Apr. 23, 2011 at 1:06 am:
love it:) i can so relate to it.
 
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open_your_eyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 21, 2011 at 3:02 pm:
That's really cute. I can relate. :)
 
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XXSticks_N_StonesXX said...
Apr. 21, 2011 at 11:44 am:
Your poem realy spoke to me. I know what its like. All I ever wanted my Jerk to do was smile at me. He had the cutist smile... But then things got complicated.....
 
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CheekymonkeyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 10:23 pm:

This is really sweet :) usually i dont go for the whole rhyming thing but this worked

 

 
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