Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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colemaken said...
on Oct. 18 at 12:42 pm
colemaken, Spring, Texas
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i lovee this:)

on Aug. 27 at 8:49 pm
natalie_reed13 GOLD, Blair, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
If you want to win, you have to first believe that you can.

Yes just yes

on Mar. 1 at 1:29 pm
MaddieGrizz SILVER, Lake Isabella, California
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Favorite Quote:
Even though I walk through the darkest valley I will fear no evil. Psalm 23:4, For I know the plans I have for you declares the Lord. Plans to prosper you, not harm you plans to give you hope and a future. Jeremiah 29:11

This is so true! I love the honest voice and if I was honest I have a such a relatable situation. That is what I love about poetry. Also, I was wondering if you could look at my work and possibly share them. Great Job!

on Jan. 17 at 2:44 pm
Elizabeth2001 BRONZE, Durand, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
“Your hardest times often lead to the greatest moments of your life. Keep going. Tough situations build strong people in the end.”

I love this so much, good job.

Wow,I love this so much and it's relateable. Beautiful writing :)

Fantastic poem,very nice

on Oct. 19 2017 at 4:53 pm
Breezette DIAMOND, Uniontown, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Every Time I even think of you, all those bad memories just fade away, 'cause your smile's enough, you're enough...

This poem is so meaningful, yet quirky. I think it pretty much sums up all good relationships. Keep writing, and If you have time, I know everyone asks; but your a good writer, so could i get your opinion on some of my work?

on May. 19 2017 at 10:58 am
I hope I grow up to be a jerk

penasolada said...
on May. 18 2017 at 7:49 pm
penasolada,
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This is soogud

on Apr. 11 2017 at 9:09 pm
the.ultimate.weirdo SILVER, Lakewood, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
" Every now and then when the brushes you by you need to use your strength to keep you up and standing tall. so never let something so small take such a big toll on your day."

i love it. i feel it.

NJacobY SILVER said...
on Apr. 7 2017 at 4:58 pm
NJacobY SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.

People call me jerk, but they do not know the things in my heart: regret, grief, and sorrow.

antea GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2017 at 1:04 pm
antea GOLD, Tirana, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Not all who wander, are lost..."

Relatable 1000% :)

on Nov. 27 2016 at 8:55 pm
Sofia_Gonz07 GOLD, San Marcos, CA, California
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I know right

on Nov. 7 2016 at 7:49 pm
Just.Another.Girl SILVER, West Plains, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Why fit in when you were born to stand out? -Dr.Seuss

Wow, Just Wow

on Oct. 17 2016 at 10:47 pm
legitannah GOLD, Akron, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Ce n'etait qu'un renard semblable 'a cent mille autres. Maus j'en ai fait mon ami, et il est maintenant unique au monde.- Antoine Saint-Exupery

Relatable.

on Jun. 10 2016 at 2:24 am
slytherinborn BRONZE, Shepherdsville, Kentucky
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Omg same!!!

jedjake BRONZE said...
on May. 7 2016 at 10:19 am
jedjake BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
This is the way the world ends not with a bang but a whimper- T.S Eliot

haha I love it :@)

Ryan_N said...
on May. 3 2016 at 4:39 pm
omg. Much amaze, much wow!

Tkenns BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2016 at 8:40 pm
Tkenns BRONZE, Des Moines, Iowa
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It's got a nice feel. You wrote it very well!!! I know this gets annoying and is kinda cheesy, but I really need some people to read over my poems. I was just wondering if anyone had the time to check out and comment any criticism on my post TeenInk.com/users/Tkenns much appreciated!!!

dpurdy said...
on Mar. 23 2016 at 1:19 pm
dpurdy, Craryville Ny, New York
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Favorite Quote:
always love yourself no matter what.

omg i love this poem


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