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I died with my angel

May 9, 2014
By PoetryGirl96 PLATINUM, Ramsey, Illinois
PoetryGirl96 PLATINUM, Ramsey, Illinois
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I was driving home from school with my phone in my hand.
He had just started texting me about this awesome new band.
I looked down for a split and then right back to the road.
I swerved but accidently hit this mid sized pregnant doe.
The car flipped and flipped until it was stopped by a pole.
My body was no longer in the car, it was laying on the road.
I felt so warm and pleasant.
She was beautiful and sweet.
My angel lifted me up.
She had beautiful white wings.
I sat there and prayed with her until I saw a flash of lights then I was brought back down to earth with the medical helicopter taking flight.
I woke up a little later suppose to be dead, but there I was not in heaven but the hospital instead. I died that day and my angel came to me.
I died with my angel and then my angel relived in me.



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on May. 22 2014 at 9:07 am
PoetryGirl96 PLATINUM, Ramsey, Illinois
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Thank you! your comment was very motivational to make my poems better.

on May. 16 2014 at 7:34 pm
PoetryGirl96 PLATINUM, Ramsey, Illinois
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Thank you!

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on May. 15 2014 at 8:44 pm
Grey369 SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
Courage is what it takes to stand up and speak; courage is also what it takes to sit down and listen.

This is amazing!

on May. 15 2014 at 7:32 am
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

wow...this left me breathless. I respect it immensely :)