The World Is Preserved MAG

November 30, 2008
By Hana Connelly BRONZE, Cambridge, Massachusetts
Hana Connelly BRONZE, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
I'm not mean, just honest. Yes, there's a difference.


Why don’t the blades of grass
Curl away from the flame
How dare the sun
Not hide its head in shame
Why does that tree
Stand so tall
Why don’t the stars
Click off and fall
Your being is twisted
Your body is burned
Life is ending
But the world is preserved



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sausha said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 10:20 am
hey man this is deep i showed it mi mi older bro and told him thats how i felt and he beat up but it was worth it

on Mar. 13 2010 at 6:20 am
delilahsky PLATINUM, Arlington, Massachusetts
28 articles 3 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because her eyes don't tear doesn't mean her heart doesn't cry. And just because she comes off strong, doesn't mean there's nothing wrong






-Author Unknown

Great imagery! This is a great poem...

TheAuthor said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 2:34 pm
Thank you for your comment, but I thought I should let you know that this is not about "what nature means to me"...it's about that old trite phrase, "it's not the end of the world"

on Mar. 8 2010 at 11:45 am
lilsweetcake95, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Draw a line and live above it.

This is very good and this person has a gift. They are decribing the nature and wat it is to them.

on Mar. 1 2010 at 6:19 pm
Lord_Limitless BRONZE, New Bern, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 21 comments
this poem should be preserved. kudos to u.

on Feb. 17 2010 at 9:12 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

AGREED A BUNCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Jan. 13 2010 at 7:19 pm
sportychick48 SILVER, Centreville, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the downside of being outrageous is that you have to go around explaining your f**king self to people."
- Ozzy Osbourne.

two words: intrigingly amazing

on Jan. 4 2010 at 9:36 pm
life_of_a_leaf PLATINUM, Morris Plains, New Jersey
22 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all just kids who grew up way too fast" - The Cab

wow...i liked how you included parts of nature in your poem, it helped create an image

kheart SILVER said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 8:22 pm
kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every second is countless. Every minute is different. When you came around." -kheart

This is an a great and unique poem. I love it!

on Dec. 10 2009 at 12:48 am
haana114 PLATINUM, -, Other
22 articles 2 photos 26 comments
really great poem.one of the best i have read.=D please write more poems like this.

p/s:please read mine and comment it...

on Nov. 18 2009 at 5:38 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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This is the best poem I've read all day! Wow, I love it. It's so meaningful and full of thought. That inspired me greatly just reading this poem. Thank you for submitting this poem. It's a real pleasure to finally come across a great poem like this one. I don't see many good ones on here, except this one. This one just really blew my mind. I would really appreciate if you stop by and check out some of my works. Thanks again! Amazing poem! I would have rated it a 6 out of 5 if I could. It's just that great. Wow...

on Nov. 9 2009 at 11:36 am
music_lover PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
MY quote: "Without music, life would be absolutely pointless.... Music is my life and it always will be!"

Wow! That is really good! I really like the questions you ask. And also the emotion! Oooo it's soooo good! Please write more like this! :D

on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:24 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

I loved this piece because it reminded me of my own style. You're more talented than me... I still am learning... but I feel like we have like styles. Check out my stuff if you like

on Sep. 25 2009 at 8:32 am
romance_lover GOLD, Edmonton, Other
12 articles 0 photos 28 comments
you should be SOOO proud! wow is all i can say...i wish i could write that well

on May. 17 2009 at 10:06 pm
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
6 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You dont know what you have until its gone"

Amazing... but still hard. I really enjoyed it.Check out some of mine. You are a good poet. I was touched... and beared

on May. 8 2009 at 12:28 am
GrainsAndOats BRONZE, Seville, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
Am I the only one who didn't think this was amazing? It's good, yes, but it didn't really capture my soul.

on May. 7 2009 at 11:14 pm
Caligirl SILVER, Denver, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 11 comments
:)

emma?buzz said...
on May. 7 2009 at 6:21 pm
that is amazing ..i love it!!

on May. 7 2009 at 3:36 pm
NickMN23 BRONZE, Goreville, Illinois
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very good i really enjoy reading it..keep up the good work. and the unqiue quality you give to it not many people write about the enviroment but ya i like it.

Jaquie BRONZE said...
on May. 7 2009 at 11:18 am
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 407 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Congratulations on being published. Your piece was wonderful. I agree completely with Hannah T. Those specific lines were my favorite. Keep writing.

God bless,

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