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I Trusted You

March 27, 2014
By Austin-Ginsberg SILVER, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
Austin-Ginsberg SILVER, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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You came around,
dressed in a good friend’s skin.
My guard was down,
Hoping for a Raven win.

You schemed away,
Wondering what to take.
My judgement began to sway,
A fool out of me you did make.

As kickoff was near,
You gave up on your lies.
Soon all I could hear,
was my sister’s cries.

You know what you did,
don’t you dare play coy.
You and them dropped off the grid,
playing with my emotions like a toy!


The author's comments:
This is a poem that was written to take my mind off of a depressing event. The original is lost so I rewrote the best I could.

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m1na GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2018 at 9:43 pm
m1na GOLD, Olympia, Washington
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This is so well written

on May. 4 2014 at 5:05 pm
Austin-Ginsberg SILVER, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
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Glad that I could give you this feeling. It was very therapeutic to write.

xDanny SILVER said...
on Apr. 4 2014 at 10:12 pm
xDanny SILVER, Windsor, California
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Favorite Quote:
"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life; it goes on." - Robert Frost

This is really cool for me because I feel like I can completely relate due to recent events. Reading this made me feel like someone else has been there. Thanks for that. Awesome poem.