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November 25, 2013
By AutumStarr808 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
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AutumStarr808 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
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Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.

Edgar Allan Poe

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Broken glass,
blood dripping,
everyone crying,
heaven falling,
hell rising,
all i remember,
is the real me,
dying

© Elizabeth H., San Bernardino, CA

The author's comments:
I wrote this after my best friend committed suicide and i didn't even know she was hurting.
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.king. SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2013 at 3:27 pm
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Wow, this is very sad, very very sad. Lots of emotion said in just a few words, I like this.  ~Silver
AutumStarr808 SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2013 at 9:21 am
AutumStarr808 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.

Edgar Allan Poe

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thank you it means a lot that you guys read my stuff.
AutumStarr808 SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2013 at 9:21 am
AutumStarr808 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
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Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before.

Edgar Allan Poe

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thank you guys so much this means alot to me  
Ashwriter SILVER said...
on Dec. 2 2013 at 8:27 pm
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I really enjoyed reading this, I could definitely feel the emotion presented. I am very sorry to hear about your friend. Terrific job on the poem!
Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Dec. 2 2013 at 1:32 pm
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This is really short, but it holds so much emotion in just 8 lines ! I like it, alot !