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Her face is defined yet soft
Her smile, bright with incisors long
Her hair, long and flowing
Her eyes, bright and breathtaking

Her voice is A violin, strong yet gentle
Her wit like her brow is sharp yet soft
Her Personality, open yet not forced

Her, in my mind I see oft
Her, a promise not a memory gone
Her with me talking and knowing

She I might meet
in a place
other than
dreams.




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Jay-WolfThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 9 at 10:25 am:
Please give me some written feedback on this and some of my other poems, I'm trying to decide wich to enter into a contest later this year  
 
freepersonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 14 at 4:40 pm :
this is cool :)
 
Jay-WolfThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 31 at 12:29 pm :
Thanks if you could check out my other stuff that would be great thanks ( ')>
 
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