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All these crazy voices
Talking in my head,
Whispering,crying,screaming,
Wishing I was dead.

All these crazy voices
Keeping me awake,
Bringing back the memories,
The pain and the heartbreak.

All these crazy voices
Holding in the hurt,
Making me remember
The bad,the hate,the dirt.

All these crazy voices
Telling me "give up",
But I will not surrender,
And I will stay on top.



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cristelsnowThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 7 at 12:44 pm:
this is one of my favorite poems on t.i. it sounds really good  
 
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LexiDawn said...
Sept. 17, 2013 at 5:48 pm:
I liked how you repeated "all these crazy voices" each time. It brought emphasis to the poem.
 
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freepersonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 1, 2013 at 10:02 am:
Cool! U r a really good writer.....I like the first stanza :)
 
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