The kid who found diamonds

February 14, 2013
there was a kid
the kid got bored
then had gone outside to play
he then went swimming
and found diamonds
then got money for them
he then bought things
things to not get bored with
then he was the happiest kid ever





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IfLifeGivesYouLemons This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 19, 2013 at 12:42 am
This is hilarious. 
 
RarelyJaded This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 18, 2013 at 10:39 am
Hi! Okay, so I'm a little confused. Was this supposed to be overly simplistic, or what? Because if not, I think you're rhythm, word choice, and ... Well, your overall message... Could have been stronger. Just being honest.
 
RarelyJaded This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 19, 2013 at 7:53 pm
Ohhhh, okay, so this was a joke. -.-
 
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