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December 14, 2012
By Ricoo22 BRONZE, Grundy, Virginia
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For every dark night there is a brighter day- 2pac
There is a reason your heart is on the left because its not always right- wiz khalifa

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Winter brings forth her pains
Love draws to an end
Emotions take hold the reigns
A lover becomes a friend
Deceitful lips burn embers
Upon nostalgia of romance
The fires of Decembers
Play songs for the last dance
Meandering eyes hit the floor
As her gaze strikes my soul
Burning my confidence to the core
Loosing love can take its toll
So I slowly freeze to ice
As a new life arises
My heart meets its demise
All thanks to this love crisis

© Katherine A., San Antonio, TX

The author's comments:
My girlfriend cheated then lied and this is how I changed after became more lonely kept to myself. It's like a whole other me was born and I wasn't the same
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Ricoo22 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 20 2012 at 9:13 am
Ricoo22 BRONZE, Grundy, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
For every dark night there is a brighter day- 2pac
There is a reason your heart is on the left because its not always right- wiz khalifa

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Thanks if you got any ideas on improvements I could do that would be great but thanks
Cayman Cook BRONZE said...
on Dec. 19 2012 at 11:18 pm
Cayman Cook BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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This is great. I was cheated on but forgave her. Worst mistake I'v ever made.