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Cautious, opening up the door
I spot my life-long enemy.
I smile politely, then ignore
Her smiling smugly back at me.
I shake my head, she shakes hers too,
Miming me grotesquely;
I sigh, and she just mocks anew,
Mimicking my misery.
But, no. I guess I'm really not,
Not so THAT unhappy,
But her. I look at her and stop;
Finding budding sympathy.
Familiar face, familiar eyes,
Her need to always copy me.
How can I, how can I despise
My Mirror, my first wannabe?
No! I smile. After all,
To imitate is flattery!




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Bubbs This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 3, 2013 at 2:22 pm:
I loved it! You told a story but managed to make it mysterious and able to have many interpretations at the same times. Aweeesome! xx
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 11:04 am :
Haha, thankyou. :)
 
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MaybeImCrazyButIThinkILoveYouThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 12, 2012 at 3:20 pm:
I'm on an ipad so I'm not going to rant. But I thoroughly enjoyed this. It made me smile!
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 7:07 pm :
I am glad. That's what its for, thats why its so cheesy.
 
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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 2:00 pm:
Reminds me of Sylvia Plath's "Mirror" only this one is happier.
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 29, 2012 at 7:05 pm :
Thankyou! Although I think Plath did a better job, better flow and better imagery, I am glad to find that it to be a little less negative. Hers seemed a little creepy to me
 
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SuNshiNe007 said...
May 14, 2012 at 8:17 am:
I like this. Its something new:) Great job! Sorry I couldnt get to yours sooner but I've been soo busy..Keep up the great work
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 19, 2012 at 6:15 pm :
Thankyou, I'm glad you like it! I wish I had found a better picture, though. Good pics aren't easy to find....
 
satellite23 replied...
Jun. 2, 2012 at 5:32 pm :
Nice! I was wondering where the poem was going, but the end brought it together nicely. At first I thought the poem had a good rhyme scheme, but you seemed to break away from that.
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 3, 2012 at 4:31 pm :
thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Yeah. I  agree there was a problem with the scheme. But I think my problem wasn't  losing the scheme so much as that I stayed with it. I rhymed 'ee' throughout the whole thing, and it kinda became beating a dead horse halfway though. It would have been fine, I think, if I had swaped half way or else shortened it. Thanks for you feedback.
 
samiasaskia24 replied...
Jul. 29, 2012 at 5:39 pm :
I agree that the rhythm was a bit different towards the end, but I liked that, I think the rhythm doesn't always have to be the same! I am not sure if I totally got everything the poem was telling me, but I really liked it! Good job!
 
LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 9, 2012 at 6:10 pm :
Thankyou. Glad you like it!
 
nikki1This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 2, 2013 at 4:27 pm :
i love this poem . nice job . i give it a 5/5 too!
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 2, 2013 at 10:47 pm :
Thank you so much!
 
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