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I am Peter Pan,
I’ll find you, my darling,
At Never Land.

I’ll take your hand,
Like I did Hook,
But in a nicer way.
We’ll fly away to Never Land,
And with me you will stay.

This is your home now too,
But never will I ever say that I love you.

We may kiss,
We may fight
And we may take flight,
Like a fairy,
But I’m staying away from love,
Because it scares me.

We’ll sit on clouds up in the sky.
I promise that I’ll never make you cry.
And we will never say goodbye,
Because I won’t forget you.

If your heart ever breaks,
It will mend,
Because you remember,
It’s just pretend.



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sbets said...
Jul. 26, 2012 at 5:30 pm

Oh my goodness, I absolutely adore this! Basing a poem on a fable is such a great idea, and the ending makes you think. Outstanding job!

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
. replied...
Oct. 6, 2012 at 8:20 pm
^That's me. Mind checking out my work?:)
 
earthhashope said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 7:34 am
Really good one!!!
 
Triumphant replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 7:42 am
Thanks earth(:
 
compassion said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 6:53 am
i love it!you are real smart!
 
Triumphant replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 6:57 am
Thanks, I don't think I'm that smart but thanks xP
 
Joshua. said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 9:51 pm
Really like this. :)
 
Triumphant replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 6:57 am
Thanks (: I read your writing and I like it too
 
torilutz8 said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 7:55 pm
I really like the idea behind this, it's really creative :)
 
Triumphant replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 6:55 am
Thanks, Peter Pan always guided me through rough times so I thought, Why not write about him?
 
WrittenEmotions said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 7:38 pm
Oh gosh this is so gorgeous! I LOVE IT! So pretty!(: 5/5!!!
 
Triumphant replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 6:54 am
Thanks soo much!
 
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