Peter Pan

March 17, 2012
By Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
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Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.


I am Peter Pan,
I’ll find you, my darling,
At Never Land.

I’ll take your hand,
Like I did Hook,
But in a nicer way.
We’ll fly away to Never Land,
And with me you will stay.

This is your home now too,
But never will I ever say that I love you.

We may kiss,
We may fight
And we may take flight,
Like a fairy,
But I’m staying away from love,
Because it scares me.

We’ll sit on clouds up in the sky.
I promise that I’ll never make you cry.
And we will never say goodbye,
Because I won’t forget you.

If your heart ever breaks,
It will mend,
Because you remember,
It’s just pretend.


The author's comments:
So this was written about my favorite fictional cartoon character (Peter Pan.) I hope you like it.

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on Oct. 6 2012 at 8:20 pm
^That's me. Mind checking out my work?:)

so_joy SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 5:30 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Oh my goodness, I absolutely adore this! Basing a poem on a fable is such a great idea, and the ending makes you think. Outstanding job!

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!


Rain. SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 7:42 am
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thanks earth(:

earthhashope said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 7:34 am
Really good one!!!

Rain. SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 6:57 am
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thanks, I don't think I'm that smart but thanks xP

Rain. SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 6:57 am
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thanks (: I read your writing and I like it too

Rain. SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 6:55 am
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thanks, Peter Pan always guided me through rough times so I thought, Why not write about him?

Rain. SILVER said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 6:54 am
Rain. SILVER, Beechhurst, New York
7 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
No matter how high you are, you always have to come back down.

Thanks soo much!

on Apr. 8 2012 at 6:53 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

i love it!you are real smart!

Joshua. GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2012 at 9:51 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

Really like this. :)

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on Mar. 27 2012 at 7:55 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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I really like the idea behind this, it's really creative :)

on Mar. 27 2012 at 7:38 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

Oh gosh this is so gorgeous! I LOVE IT! So pretty!(: 5/5!!!




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