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Fall to a Fly

January 27, 2012
By ElleAhre PLATINUM, Gloucester, Massachusetts
ElleAhre PLATINUM, Gloucester, Massachusetts
25 articles 4 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can close your eyes to everything you do not want to see, but you can not close you heart to things you do not want to feel"


It’s about death, it’s about pain
It’s about loosing the air to the rain

It’s about lying awake all through the night
The idea of the morning that inspires you fright

It’s about fall through clouds of despair
Wondering if you’re the only one there

But then there’s a smile that makes you so sure
That real love and happiness is the only cure

It’s about a feeling that suspends you in the sky
It’s about turning a fall to a fly


The author's comments:
about that one thing that changes you whole perspective: when you've been falling so hard for so long just one person comes along and shows you that the whole time you haven't been falling you've been flying

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on Jan. 31 2012 at 7:30 am
ElleAhre PLATINUM, Gloucester, Massachusetts
25 articles 4 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can close your eyes to everything you do not want to see, but you can not close you heart to things you do not want to feel"

thank so much, im glad you liked it and i appreciate the critique. thank you for checking it out and commenting!

HaleyS. GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 6:53 pm
HaleyS. GOLD, Byram, Mississippi
19 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you drown, at least die knowing you were headed for the shore.
-Ray Bradbury

Sometimes it gets confusiong, but i rilly liked it. strong, good message.