Porcelain Stars MAG

April 13, 2008
By issaiah1332 BRONZE, Enterprise, Wisconsin
issaiah1332 BRONZE, Enterprise, Wisconsin
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The moon falls for the sun
And begets beautiful stars
With absent skies of trust
And celestial scars

Skin scorched to porcelain
Let’s see what the dark beholds
As patience dies to wear thin
And your embrace awaits cold

Part the seas
With lips the same
To find the genie
With a wish unmade

I once dreamed of poetic landscapes
Or to hold a true love
but I have no more faith in this fate
For this world is not enough

So maybe I can grab your hand
And we can leave this place
with a kiss good-bye
And your hair in your face

The wind wisps this rose garden
And the clouds cloud my head
But I search for you … I always have
On this destiny, never before tread

The moon falls for the sun
And begets beautiful stars
With absent skies of trust
We make this world ours



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on Sep. 3 2016 at 10:14 pm
skematt PLATINUM, Shanghai, Other
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Amazing, beautiful poem!

on Sep. 4 2014 at 6:05 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This is absolutely beautiful. I know so many people have tols you this, but it is. I was there, when I was reading the poem, I hope that makes sense. You're a wonderful, talented person and writer, and I hope you know that. Thank you for sharing this!

on May. 26 2014 at 12:24 am
GingerMonk PLATINUM, Lowell, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I became insane with long intervals of horrible sanity..."
-Edgar Allen Poe

I agree entirely. Truly fantastic and beautiful.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 10 2013 at 7:00 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

The moon falls for the sun  And begets beautiful stars With absent skies of trust  We make this world ours   That stanza summerizes the poem perfectly. Your wording and imagery are fantastic. Beautiful poem, truly. 5/5

Abby96 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2013 at 5:14 pm
Abby96 BRONZE, Leesburg, Virginia
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Beautiful. The word choice was spot on.

irishlass317 said...
on Feb. 17 2012 at 11:12 pm
irishlass317, Jefferson City, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I asked Jesus 'How much do you love me?' He answered 'This much.' And He streched out His arms and died."

This is beautiful!! Great job!!!!! :D

eliana924 GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 9:32 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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Great poem! I especially like the way you used repetition.

on Dec. 12 2011 at 2:39 pm
GoGoGryffindor BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
1 article 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
-After all this time?
-Always.

This is a really wonderful poem. The imagery is amazing!! It creates such a clear picture in my mind.

on Jun. 20 2011 at 11:10 am
ThisGirlWillMakeMistakes PLATINUM, Raymore, Missouri
23 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over,
Smile because it happened."


-Dr. Suess

Amazing <3

1dan305 SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 12:38 pm
1dan305 SILVER, Florida City, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Today, I realized that all matter is merely energy condensed to a slow vibration — that we are all one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively. There is no such thing as death; life is only a dream, and we are the imagination of ourselves"

great sense of imagry :D

on Feb. 14 2011 at 8:29 pm
mandaloreP GOLD, Forked River, New Jersey
15 articles 4 photos 21 comments
beautiful imagry.

on Jan. 12 2011 at 11:47 am
alymarie3 PLATINUM, Leavenworth, Kansas
24 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Piglet: How do you spell love?
Pooh: You don't spell it, you feel it

whoa! I got so into the poem i felt like i was there! Well done! Well done!

on Oct. 9 2010 at 11:15 am
EmilyClark BRONZE, Wayne, Pennsylvania
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Fantastic! I love the rhythm of the poem.

on Sep. 18 2010 at 11:29 am
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

just beautifull[: <3

on Sep. 10 2010 at 7:07 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

I have but one word: Beautiful.

Absolutely :)


Danica SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 11:48 pm
Danica SILVER, Avondale, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is our choices, that show who we truly are, far more than our abilities." -- Albus Dumbledore

This is SO beautiful and creative; I absolutely love it. Great job!  I would love your opinion on some of my work sometime if you have the chance :)

on Jun. 13 2010 at 7:17 pm
MirandaAdelyn SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
9 articles 1 photo 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I am very interested and fascinated how everyone loves each other, but no one really likes each other.”
― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

Wow, that was really good! I love the imagery in the first part!! Keep it up!

on May. 24 2010 at 7:54 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

^^ hehe omgg i love it!!!!!! beautiful word choice and it gav great imagery in the beginning part:)))) love it soo much

on May. 20 2010 at 8:05 am
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
16 articles 2 photos 207 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Astounding! I love this poem, it is so beautiful and I adore the cadence of it! Bravo! :)

on May. 20 2010 at 8:04 am
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And I'll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I've found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I've lost everything."-mayday parade

"but I have no more faith in this fate
For this world is not enough

So maybe I can grab your hand
And we can leave this place
with a kiss good-bye"

-AMAZING!!!



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