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Where are you?

I know I have lost thee,
before there was a sign.
I know I am weaker,
that compels me to thine.

Your presence still relies,
deep in my mind.
You keep me wandering, why you're so kind.

It takes time,
to know whats mind.
To decide if you're sweet like berries,
or bitter like wine.

Someone against me, or someone to agree.
Someone to trust again,
to bring me to thee.



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Roksi04This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 6:33 am
Brilliant poem! I love this line, the way you expressed it. "To decide if you're sweet like berries, or bitter like wine." :)
 
annawofle replied...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 3:34 pm
Thank you so much your commentary really means a lot:)
 
PrincessSparkleStar said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 1:18 pm
I like your rhyme scheme in this poem. Keep up the good work! Please check out my poem as well!
 
annawofle replied...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 3:35 pm
Thank you so much:)
 
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