What I Would Never Beg of You

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Help me out
Give me your hand
And carry me away

Hold me in your harms
Hug me while I cry
And dry all of my tears

Please stay with me
Just tell me that you love me
And that everything is alright

Please do all those things
I would never beg of you





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Writerforlife7423 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 12:39 pm
I totally know how you feel! Those little things matter! I like this poem, but you might want to list it as free verse instead. Also, would you mind checking out some of my work please? I'd love to get feedback! Thanks, and again, awesome work!
 
ElleAhre replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 3:41 pm
thanks so much for your comment i love to know that someone else understands what im trying to communicate that’s the reason i create the art that i do, though i never am sure whet to list it as lol! (do u no by any chance how to change it with out deleting the whole thing?) i really admire your work, your really talented and your pieces are so powerful. i especially love your haikus, how you can create your point inside that uniform and with such carefully chosen words. it fantastic!... (more »)
 
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