What I Would Never Beg of You

November 21, 2011
By ElleAhre PLATINUM, Gloucester, Massachusetts
ElleAhre PLATINUM, Gloucester, Massachusetts
25 articles 4 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can close your eyes to everything you do not want to see, but you can not close you heart to things you do not want to feel"


Help me out
Give me your hand
And carry me away

Hold me in your harms
Hug me while I cry
And dry all of my tears

Please stay with me
Just tell me that you love me
And that everything is alright

Please do all those things
I would never beg of you


The author's comments:
some times you just want all those things that you are still to proud to admit that you need and you just hope that someone out there will come along do it anyways

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on Nov. 26 2011 at 3:41 pm
ElleAhre PLATINUM, Gloucester, Massachusetts
25 articles 4 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"you can close your eyes to everything you do not want to see, but you can not close you heart to things you do not want to feel"

thanks so much for your comment i love to know that someone else understands what im trying to communicate that’s the reason i create the art that i do, though i never am sure whet to list it as lol! (do u no by any chance how to change it with out deleting the whole thing?) i really admire your work, your really talented and your pieces are so powerful. i especially love your haikus, how you can create your point inside that uniform and with such carefully chosen words. it fantastic! 2 of your poems are tagged under my favorites now! thanks for you interest in my work and thanks for sharing yours!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 12:39 pm
ebj.2014 PLATINUM, St. John, Washington
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I totally know how you feel! Those little things matter! I like this poem, but you might want to list it as free verse instead. Also, would you mind checking out some of my work please? I'd love to get feedback! Thanks, and again, awesome work!




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