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I was a bird, now I sit in your hand
I was a wave, but I’m caught on your sand
I was a cloud, but I’ve left the sky behind
I was a star, the brightest you’ll ever find
I was a dream, now I’m caught in your net
I had a plan, but you’ve made me forget

Hopes scatter to the wind and now I’m just a girl
Who never believed a love like this would ever change her world
My languishing in loneliness
Is now brimming with bliss
I see lights behind my eyelids
With every sun-filled kiss
My wanderings in twilight and ever-scattered mind
Are your travels too, and troubles, as you’ll soon find
But trouble is no problem when you have the answers right here
You hold a dream by her heart so what have you to fear?

Come and kiss this tamed bird
This voyager of the sky
I’ll take you with me in my heart
Every time I leave to fly
Come and comfort this grounded wave
Who gave up the sea for you
I’ll smile and sigh in your arms
And forget the ocean blue
Come and join this captivated cloud
And stay, even when I cry
It was for you I left my perch
My place up in the sky
Come and hold this fallen star
This captured, enraptured light
Hold me close and don’t let go
And I’ll linger long after night



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starlight26 said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 9:11 pm:
LOVEDDDD IT! GREAT GREAT job. You wrote this soo beautifully! Everything fit and felt so good together. You are very talented!!!! Check out some of my work if you'd like :)
 
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BeccaAnne said...
Nov. 4, 2011 at 3:12 pm:
Tres bien! Loved it, keep it up!
 
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Jaredmeyer18 said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 2:02 pm:
This poem is quite good, very descriptive, as it seems all of your work is. I enjoyed it a lot, keep up the spectacular work, "freyabean"!
 
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firebird3 said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 12:26 pm:
i really love this, it reminds me of me in many ways. don't give up and keep it going. i will have to say this is the only one that i totally understand and feel.
 
Tamara558 replied...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 1:59 pm :
You're sooo right i can relate to this poem a lot! Dont stop writing :)!!
 
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Sarahjay85 said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 2:04 pm:
I liked this, i can totally see it this girl falling in love!
 
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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 6:20 am:

This is great and very-well written! Great work and don't stop writing because you've got some talent!

Check out my stuff sometime?

 
freyabean This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 2:18 pm :

Thank you :)! And I did, you're fantastic! 

Btw, do you have a Tumblr?

 
Lexie96 replied...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 4:07 pm :
I don't have one :( But I'm glad that you liked the poems!
 
freyabean This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 5:36 pm :
They were quite good :) 
 
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Mikeyboyyy said...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 10:55 pm:
agreed, this is real good!
 
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LearnLoveLaugh said...
Nov. 1, 2011 at 10:17 pm:
Very nice(: I really liked this!
 
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