Like a Brilliant Star in The Night Sky

September 9, 2011
By Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments

Your smile is like
A ray of sun shining out from behind the clouds
Like the sound of music, blasting loud
Like the smell of rain, fresh on the pavement over night
Like a baby bird taking his first flight
Like a love song made just for me
Like a bunch of kids running free
Like brilliant, bright stars, sparkling in the night sky
Your smile makes me happy and I don’t know why.

Your eyes are like
Two deep pools filled with the ocean blue
They are the rainbow’s most beautiful, colorful hue.
Like sprinkles on ice cream
Like cherries on cake
Like beautiful flowers; the most breathtaking scene
Like the sunset at the end of a movie on the screen
Like brilliant, bright stars, sparkling in the night sky
Your eyes make me happy and I don’t know why.

You are
The whip cream to my birthday cake
The dream from which I don’t wish to wake
Like a pair of doves singing softly, their tunes of love
Like angels floating high above
Like the swaying of trees, relaxing and serene
Like a piano melody, oh-so crisp and clean
Like the most brilliant, bright star, sparkling in the night sky
You make me so happy and I don’t know why.



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on Mar. 7 2012 at 2:18 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments

wow. thank you for that compliment. I'm glad I made you smile :)

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on Mar. 6 2012 at 11:37 pm
lovemenot PLATINUM, Port Angeles, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"My names Red and Im an alcoholic."~Red, Shark Night 3D

I love this. Thanks for giving me something to smile about.

on Oct. 23 2011 at 10:22 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments
Thank you. And thanks for being the first to comment

on Oct. 23 2011 at 9:45 pm
MelissaRachel03 BRONZE, Cameron, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"If you're going to be two-faced, at least make one of them pretty."
-Marilyn Monroe

I'm in love with this. <3




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