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“Destruction Of The Past”

We met in Science class period eight…
As I didn’t know my fate…
Me making jokes about one soul…
As I knew I had no chance in this role…

I made fun of this one…
Feeling like I won…
As I didn’t know she had a crush…
As I didn’t even notice that blush…

I saw the secret note…
Feeling my heart vote….
Feeling embarrassed what I’ve been telling her…
My head getting fuzzy like a lone wolves fur…

I call the number….
I feel like I am in a long slumber…
Hearing her gentle voice…
As I tell her my choice…

Our souls in love..
Feeling like everything was simple like a peaceful dove…
Knowing this was the best choice I have done….
As I felt the love stun…

Days to weeks and weeks to months as our brake ups begin..
My head begins to spin….
Feeling different then I use to…
As I feel like our love blew too...

As we end this relationship..
We stick with a simple friendship…
As we fell apart…
As we dart from each others heart…

As I did not know I hurt her mentally…
As I didn’t mean to do such it was accidentally…
As I fall into peace’s…
My loneliness increases…

I didn’t know what she was doing..
As I felt like this was suicide viewing…
She tells me what I have made…
As I was shocked when she used that blade..

My heart booming in pain..
As I did not know her heart was sprained..
She finally tells me her suffering…
The pain enters me as its flooding…


Years go by as I prove to my self I have changed…
She knows I have not reach that range..
My soul telling me that the jerk is out of me..
She knows that can not be..

I fall to my knees crying out for her trust…
As she watches me and as she just cussed…
The words I say meant nothing…
She stares at me chuckling..

As I would do anything for her forgiveness…
I sit here and go threw this…
She calling me pathetic…
As I know my heart is so poetic..

Why cant I just have her back in my life…
As I know this will go on like a bitter strife…
Love means nothing to this lone wolf in this empty world..
As I am in bed curled…



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cookiestar said...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 6:22 am:
Wow, this is amazing. It's well written, and I love the flow:).
 
Lonexwolf replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 6:47 am :
Thank you, I appreciate the comment and it it goes with the flow
 
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Snake_Tounge said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 12:20 am:
Oh My Gosh, not to be sappy or anything, but I nearly cried! You have such a way with words :)
 
Lonexwolf replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 12:59 am :
 I apologize for almost making you cry. I hope you enjoyed though the poem. I am gonna make more poems soon. 
 
Snake_Tounge replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 1:01 am :
LOL, no its fine :) Just as long as you write more I promise to hold back the waterworks :~)
 
Lonexwolf replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 1:09 am :
Alright HAH
 
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Nikiblue said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 8:39 pm:
This was good, I liked the easy flow to it. Its an easy read and it gives the reader a good, vivid image. Good job (:
 
Lonexwolf replied...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 5:52 am :
Thank you sooo much. :) 
 
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.Izzy. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 11:25 am:
I really liked this. I could tell it was from the heart, not forced, making it a great poem.
 
Lonexwolf replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 11:28 am :
Thank you so much. I appreciate the comment. ^_^ Makes me happy. 
 
.Izzy. replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 8:35 pm :
You're welcome(:
 
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Writomania This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 6:56 am:

Oh wow.

It was like a story. There were a few typos which i'm sure would've been edited on a second read.

Other that that; it was well written :)

 
Lonexwolf replied...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 8:32 am :
Thank you and I saw them just now hah, but like my FOrum this is from the heart, and well this tells you how I feel at the moment. I made this 5 months ago and I am still adding more poems and currently making them, this is between a story and a poem so yeah xPP I hope you enjoy my other pieces.
 
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