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Whenever i look outside

April 13, 2011
By Elizabeth4567 SILVER, St.Albans, Vermont
Elizabeth4567 SILVER, St.Albans, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"wherever you go, there you are!" ~ "We are the music makers, and we are the dreamers of dreams." ~ "I am still human. I have feelings too. All i want is to be loved for myself, and for my talents."


Whenever I look outside,
I see rain.
Whenever I look outside,
I see pain.
Whenever I look outside,
I see stains
from tears I shed just yesterday.

Whenever I look outside,
I see reign
Whenever I look outside,
I see pane
Whenever I look outside,
I see strain
from you I see you are so lame.



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RRRRR BRONZE said...
on Jun. 5 2011 at 11:14 pm
RRRRR BRONZE, Orrville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Education is when you read the fine print. Experience is when you don't."- Pete Seeger

"I didn't quit because I wasn't strong enough to live through it, i stopped because i was strong enough to move on." -Unknown

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the first stanza. LOVE IT. Makes so much sense, the stain part is beautiful. 

Second one? i didn't get it. I mean i understood the synonym thing, but the lame part?? 

 

Overall, Great job!!!