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Whenever i look outside

Whenever I look outside,
I see rain.
Whenever I look outside,
I see pain.
Whenever I look outside,
I see stains
from tears I shed just yesterday.

Whenever I look outside,
I see reign
Whenever I look outside,
I see pane
Whenever I look outside,
I see strain
from you I see you are so lame.





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AnonymousOne said...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 11:14 pm

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the first stanza. LOVE IT. Makes so much sense, the stain part is beautiful. 

Second one? i didn't get it. I mean i understood the synonym thing, but the lame part?? 

 

Overall, Great job!!!

 
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