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Who am I?

By , Hermitage, TN
The shattered remains of a broken heart
The dust in the wind, or an unneeded part
The sorrow or wonder in a child’s eyes
The hollow feeling after a loved one dies

The beaten and slaughtered from our past
The courage of our future that will last
The twinkle and gleam for a new tomorrow
The happiness remaining behind all our sorrow

The blood flowing through our veins
The one who endures all our hopes and pains
Someone who looks for a brand new day
We are all that person in every way



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holly.nicole said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 1:21 pm:
Oh my goshh i love this poem!! This is VERY VERY good! i love it!
 
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Feb. 20, 2012 at 5:27 pm :
Thank you so much!
 
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natalie_is_my_name said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 8:06 pm:
blown away!keep it up
 
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Feb. 20, 2012 at 5:32 pm :
Thanks! I will be sure to at least try to!
 
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Iloveyoukid said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 6:59 am:
Very good poem....;)
 
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Feb. 20, 2012 at 5:32 pm :
Thank you...;)
 
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