Angel with Wings

September 22, 2010
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He says i fell from the sky with wings of golden light
That when he saw me he died
That when i kissed him i brought him back to life.
I made it right when he'd been wronged.
He said his heart was black until he saw me and he was cleansed of his lies as if he'd said goodbye to his life of crime.

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agricola said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 4:53 pm
i am sorry i found this to be mis leading and missing key elements to be a ballad
RedRosePoet replied...
Oct. 5, 2010 at 6:53 pm
he key elements of a ballad is telling a story. thats what im doing. sorry you dont approve.
spiritualrevelationrevealspainandrevolution said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 10:52 pm
wow, love how it creates a duo of fantasy and real life in the same experience, rate mine?
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