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The boy with the green eyes


The beautiful green eyed boy, a remarkable vision,
I am kept in the dark, awaiting his decision.
I fall in love with him, just that once more,
Awake to the sound of him knocking on my door.
Decisions, decisions. Did he make the correct choice?
I beckon him inside, listening out for his heavenly voice.

My love sent me away, told me he had to leave me,
Your just not what I need right now, says he.
“Our lives were not meant to be spent together”
He told me once how we would last forever.
Does he think that, I’m not enough for him?
I know I couldn’t have been! Probably because I’m not thin.
Every night he captures my silent dreams.
My green eyed boy, so perfect in every way.
And I will miss him every day.

The next day, I lie awake in this cold dark room.
I pray silently to myself, wishing that my life would be over soon.
Is my choice to be the right one?
To be or not to be, Shakespeare once said.
But that won’t matter anymore, at least not when I’m dead.

An hour later I wonder if I could really live on without him,
so I down my sorrows with numerous bottles of gin.
Little to know I wasn’t to awaken that night,
Drinking myself to death; I’m probably not a pretty sight.
News of my death travelled fast,
And my green eyed boy found out last.

Our lives were not meant to be spent together
he told me once, how we would last forever.

My green eyed boy so perfect in every way.

And I will miss him every day.




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HIPPIEatHEART_writerINsoulThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 4:16 pm:

Usually I'm not one for love poetry, but I really like this one! It  has a lot of emotion. It's not like "SHE BROKE MAH HEART AND IT FELL ALL DA WAY TO MAH SHOES" or something like that.

I clicked on it mainly because green eyes are my favorite. All three of my silblings got them, but I was stuck with brown. That's my luck, I guess. Plus, there's this kid who sits next to me in class, and his eyes are scary green! I'm jealous. :)

Anyway, I *really* like it. My favorite line... (more »)

 
Meliz replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 4:45 pm :

Hehe thankyou.
Its only recently I started to look at poetry :) lol at your quote :P

Aah i love green eyes so much, well i have brown eyes too :/ ooh welll.
i would be jealous too, green eyes are just so lovely and intense!

Ooh yes I have to say that might be my favorite line too. I remember thinking of shakespear at the time then It suddenly came to me!

Thankyou so much for your review anyways I'll check out your stuff xx

 

 
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