Birthday Wishes

The wishes I make on birthdays candles
Never do come true
So no more wishes for me
I’m done, I’ve stopped, I’m through

So why do we wish on things
If they just make us blue?
Instead of wishing we should fight
To make our dreams come true





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Rainedrop said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 4:46 pm
thanks everyone i never thought that this poem would have so many views!!
 
CarolynQ said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 10:19 am

Short, Simple, Yet Utterly Outstanding!

Please check out my poetry I would love to hear some feedback :)

 
DustyCheyanne<3 said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 5:04 pm

fantastic!! and soo true. you are a great writer! thumbs up!!

please check out/ rate some of my work.

 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 12:09 am
omg i love this!!! its sooo  good!! i can feel the emotion!!! if you could please rate and comment my work that would be great!! thanks and u r really good dont stop!!!
 
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