Love Senses All

I love you more than you could know
more than you can see,
so much that my heart skips a beat
every time you glance at me.

I love you more than you could know,
more than you can feel,
its such an overpowering emotion,
I know this must be real.

I love you more than you could know
more than you can hear,
my body feels like lightning
whenever you are near.

I love you more than you could know
more than you can taste,
the feeling is so strong that I know
that it isn’t going to waste.

I love you more than you could know,
more than you can smell,
and that’s why my heart is always crushed
when its time to say farewell.





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nickykens This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 11:45 pm
Oh wait!  I get it.  :) don't change smell to tell.  :P
 
nickykens This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 11:43 pm
Wow I love this!  It sums up quite a bit of what I've been trying to say lately!  Great job.  The only suggestion I have is to change "smell" to "tell," but that's just me.
 
MaKayla1513 said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 6:07 pm
This was amazing ! I love how you put these feelings in words! Brilliant!
 
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